Amaz0ns

hi!
i just added my first story on brawna.
i have in mind to put there my old stories too - probably this summer.

i wrote this one directly in english, so i hope it can be readed easily.
thanks for commenting it.

brawna.org/stories/rn69-stories

part 2 posted, - the mechanic -
i hope you will enjoy it, even if english isn't perfect.

brawna.org/stories/rn69-stories

part 3 -the dog breeder - is online.
still on brawna.

bye

hi !

i started this topic 2 weeks ago - when i posted my firt chapters in brawna -
Since, i have 2 replies - per up to 800 readers - meanwhile other stories have 20 !!

I assume - i'm sure - there is something wrong in my stories, so help me to improve my work.
Maybe that's the story by itselt, maybe the writing which make the reading too difficult, maybe both.

Please tell me.

This help me for my comics too. So ...
... if you notice a grammatical error which i allways do, thanks to tell me - I can't afford an english teacher.

I wouldn't read to much into the numbers, many of us follow Brawna on its own, and tend to not comment much. I for one like your stories and look forward to more.

Sorry, I didn't realize this thread was up here in amaz0ns.
I absolutely love the story, and is eager for continuation, though I hope that the final episode will bring this man to HIS "ideal woman" (or even women, if he can survive more than one of them lol)....

thanks to jdrabbit1 and ad_meyer for your comments.
part four is almost ready.

here is the link to the '.pdf' of the story i posted on brawna, 2 months ago, 'RN69 stories - 2 - The mechanic' :

www.megaupload.com/?d=9M7YVWWX

it's made like 'how i discovered bodybuilding' except i hadn't had the time to the postwork. i hope you like anyway.

I downloaded it a few minutes ago. Great Stuff!! Thanks, I've always loved your handdrawn artwork and stories. Your poser work is great too. I hope you do more of them.

Thanks Rodman for your comments !

here is the part 1 of RN69 stories - the biker. NSFW


www.megaupload.com/?d=5EHXHEKV

Also, just downloaded this one also. Great story and artwork!!! Love your work.
BTW, Have you ever considered submitting your stories and work to DTM's Amy's Conquest site?