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Fiction => Growth Stories => Topic started by: raylight on Oct 21, 2008, 11:19 AM

Title: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: raylight on Oct 21, 2008, 11:19 AM

I'm really surprised he or somebody else hasn't already posted this, but this is definitely a classic FMG story, with the added benefit of being immensely readable other than the FMG scene.

http://brawna.org/stories/eleanor

I hope I'm not the only one who enjoyed this story.

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: strang3n3 on Oct 21, 2008, 09:48 PM

That was a very good story.

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: Lingster on Oct 21, 2008, 11:56 PM

Make sure to post comments so Morpheus writes more stories for us!

Also, go join his Yahoo! group and tell him there, also: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Morpheuscabinet2/

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: Prophet Tenebrae on Oct 22, 2008, 01:01 PM

Surely the purpose of Brawna is that we can let the festering uselessness of Yahoo groups die a death?

Good stuff... but rather more of a scene, than a story. I suppose that can be considered good or bad.

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: DevonCory on Oct 25, 2008, 04:05 PM

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? ;)

The "What's happening to me?" comment always does it for me, so I was hooked right there. I would have liked Ellie to be more vocal about her transformation and for the growth itself to be more detailed. All in all though, quite nice.

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: Lingster on Nov 20, 2008, 01:04 PM

Quote from: DevonCory on Oct 25, 2008, 04:05 PM

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? ;)

Those freakin' gypsies! I read it again last night and I really enjoy it.

Title: Re: Eleanor by Morpheus
Post by: Trina on Nov 20, 2008, 07:12 PM

Hey!!! I'm a gypsy... Or at least my anscestors were. ;D
So, if any of y'all need any of that vitality potion, come find me in my wanderings. If you can! ;)