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Title: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: darkscribex on Jun 05, 2009, 06:43 AM Hello all. I've been lurking these forums a while and I'm a big fan of female muscle. I finally decided to try my hand at some fiction. Enjoy.
http://brawna.org/stories/ericka-beast-part-i Title: Re: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: darkscribex on Jun 05, 2009, 08:52 AM Edited and uploaded an additional section. I must say, writing this was an...interesting experience. And enjoyable. Part II should follow soon.
Title: Re: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: darkscribex on Jun 07, 2009, 07:33 AM part ii is up. Anybody care to comment? I'd love some feedback.
Title: Re: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: alex on Jun 07, 2009, 07:55 AM Very nice story so far. Looking forward to hearing what she's going to do next (probably mayhem) and how big she's going to get.
Title: Re: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: El_Roy_1999 on Jun 08, 2009, 06:40 PM Reposted from Brawna:
I like it! It's a crazy story, full of crazy people. I somehow enjoy it. Besides, will Tanya reappear? She might be available for some competitive growth/revenge, mightn't she? Please write on! Title: Re: ericka the beast - part i (new story) Post by: Mr.Shhh on Jun 10, 2009, 05:09 PM I wanted to congratulate you on the overwhelming awesomeness of your story! He's the comment I posted on Brawna:
First off, as a piece of first-time fiction your writing is extremely clear and descriptive. You seem to be a natural writer. The story itself is so packed with the stuff I love it's almost crazy. I've never been a fan of magical muscle growth, so I was thrilled to see how hard Erika struggles to forge her dream physique. I particularly like how far you push things - clothes bursting, popping veins, tit-less pecs - this is female muscle pushed to the max! Can't wait to read more!
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