I kinda imagined the characters (Outside of Sharon and Marissa) like the personalities I based them off of with a twist of my own. But youre much more experienced at writing than I am, and if you think thats needed, Ill keep it in mind and try not to mess up in the next chapter.
Thank you both on the comments.
You are most welcome, dear friend, and I's know that you can never miss anything if you use all the passion of your Young Heart and strong mind.
I's greatly look forward to all your future works, my's dear friend.
Peace
Neon