Well you had a Dark Tower fan-story vibe going on that got plugged into some of your earlier unconnected original tales like "Amazon Cruise". The omniversal threat of the Crimson King, and a potential Walking Man alternate with the Man In Black came to the fore in this most recent retooling as well.
In regards to the erotic content there's some interesting innovation that hasn't happened before in your tales. The girl protagonist in your recent "MAgic I-Phone" addition actually finding a coherent advantage with her transhuman sexuality for example.
Right on! Thanks for the critique. You're also right on target too! Goodonya!
From those exercises I believe she's a CrossFit(ter). It's amazing how popular Crossfit is among women, and it really does whip them into great shape, even though they may not immediately look it. The attacker here found out the hard way...
Some earlier themes of yours showing up in this story took me by surprise.
I liked the broadening of your other tales by their connection to this one.
Thanks!!
Hmmm, I'm curious, what are the "earlier themes"(long tongues sure...) and what other tales were "broadened" by this one? Just curious because I'm probably too close to my own stories to see it...