I wanted to congratulate you on the overwhelming awesomeness of your story! He's the comment I posted on Brawna:
First off, as a piece of first-time fiction your writing is extremely clear and descriptive. You seem to be a natural writer. The story itself is so packed with the stuff I love it's almost crazy. I've never been a fan of magical muscle growth, so I was thrilled to see how hard Erika struggles to forge her dream physique. I particularly like how far you push things - clothes bursting, popping veins, tit-less pecs - this is female muscle pushed to the max! Can't wait to read more!
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. So far, reactions to the story have been very polarized. If people feel things went too far this time, I'll certainly dial it back a bit in the next story. Any other thoughts out there? 
