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Author Topic: A Kind of Magic  (Read 3538 times)
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« Reply #8 on: Sep 20, 2004, 06:22 PM »

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I liked how he was tricked into giving her control of his wishes.


I wouldn't say that she had total control of his wishes, but it did have to be something they both agreed on; from that standpoint, they're equal.
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« Reply #9 on: Sep 20, 2004, 07:45 PM »

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I liked how he was tricked into giving her control of his wishes.


I wouldn't say that she had total control of his wishes, but it did have to be something they both agreed on; from that standpoint, they're equal.


Ha!  Not that equal!  She's 10 times stronger then he is now!  Right now, he would probably do wherever she "asked"of him.  Wouldn't you? Wink
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« Reply #10 on: Sep 20, 2004, 08:54 PM »

And that my friends is my conundrum, if( and it's a big if) I do write another chapter do I make Sandy into a power mad amazon forcing Sean to wish her bigger and stronger until she possess the power of a god! Or do I let them explore the magic in a more loving holsom way? Give me your opinions, ideas and who knows what can happen in the wonderfully wacky world of FMG fiction.
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« Reply #11 on: Sep 20, 2004, 09:39 PM »

write both have us choose which ending we liked to read.
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« Reply #12 on: Sep 20, 2004, 10:09 PM »

hmmm...

You could it have both ways.  Her being a dominant, poweful, yet loving amazon.    I'm not really into the whole x1000000 stronger thing.  I think she's plenty strong as she is, and if she gets any bigger, it will become a giantess story.

What you could do,  is have her make him give her some of his strength and muscles, being even more in her power.  Mark Newman  usually does this pretty well, sometimes in a pretty suffocating way.  But it really works.  Just a thought.
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« Reply #13 on: Sep 21, 2004, 05:26 PM »

Ristard why not have these 'wish realities' fight it out.

For instance a wish phrased "So I could see the best and worst that could happen" but with REALITY itself instead diverging into two echoes.

So you could have 'Mini-Gaintess' vs 'Soccer Mom to age regressed kidnappers' and the respective partners of each.

The battleground might be the lottery alternate future LA that you placed them in.

Great story though! It would be interesting to see it from the point of view of the girl before she even casts the spell. Perhaps the only way she even managed to complete the sorcery was that 'future self Goddess drunk with power' whispered the formula into her younger self's ear.

Great story though thank you for sharing!
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« Reply #14 on: Sep 21, 2004, 10:30 PM »

I'm votin' for loving and wholesome.  I'm a lover, not a fighter.  I like the passion of two lovers more than the conflict of a dominatrix and dominatee.
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« Reply #15 on: Sep 22, 2004, 03:49 AM »

I'd probably end up doing both.  For example.  It can start out loving and sweet and she might suggest making her stronger and stronger as part of a sex game.  But things have a way of getting out of hand.  Eventually she becomes superhuman and the lust for power takes over.
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