i do appologize for the slight alterations, but im sure you can see your best is still in the story.
as for the story idea, i truely would like to try..... i mean, it wont be close to anything you write, but hoping that it gets an acceptable grade... lol
once again, great site man! respect = )
I'm glad you liked it. Reposting its fine, but making changes to the original? I'm not crazy about, but that is how I started out. Now can you go the next step? In my original there were some other women I made observations about. Can you now take one of them and write a gts story about on of them? That is why I wrote them in. I always like to leave that little hanging chad in my stories to egg on the next writer.
