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Author Topic: HARDBODY Chapter Three: The Crush (nsfw)  (Read 3939 times)
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« Reply #16 on: Feb 22, 2006, 08:07 PM »

Not too sure about pushing bulldozer shovels... I like super-strength as much as the next guy, but Jenna's strength is supposed to be in the realm of possibility (kind of).  I've always found feats of strength sexier when the woman has to really push themselves rather than lifting something effortlessly. 

Another idea I had is to have someone question just how strong Jenna is.  This could intrigue Jenna and send her off on a quest to test her limits.  Who knows what crazy stuff she could find to do?

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« Reply #17 on: Feb 22, 2006, 08:46 PM »

I agree, I don't want her strength to be absolutely limitless, I mean what fun is that, but its obvious that Jenna has well above the muscle size of the world's biggest male bodybuilder, and from her strength show in the second chapter is capable of lifting a ton or more of weight for multiple repetitions, but I agree with you on the idea, we should find some acceptable limits. Carlifting for sure, but not bulldozer lifting, ok. Steel bar bending is okay, but not I-beam bending. How about tug of war, armwrestling, and regular wrestling, all against multiple numbers of regular guys?
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« Reply #18 on: Feb 22, 2006, 09:54 PM »

Hmmm.  Arm wrestling against a bunch of guys at once?  That I'd like to see!  As for bending bars - you'll be seeing some of that in chapter 4 (which is about half done).  Keep the strength feat ideas coming!

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« Reply #19 on: Feb 22, 2006, 10:17 PM »

Cool, you want my help? Thats awesome! Alright, this thought was going through my head, I bet her back is so wide that three men can sit on it, so why not have her do push ups with 3 football players sitting on her back. I don't know how strong you want to make her, where the cut off is, how about lifting the front end of the school bus off the ground?
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« Reply #20 on: Feb 22, 2006, 10:40 PM »

I agree, there are far too many stories out there with girls doin stuff effortlessly. Jenna already is a behemoth, lets leave it at that. Her strength feats shouldn't exceed a realistic limit for someone her size (which should be quite high anyways)  :lol:

Just lifting stuff is boring I think it's been done too often. With her, I think character, I think the fact that she is a bit embarassed / unsure of her size opens the window for a lot of passive feats, i.e. destroying something without wanting to just because of her size. Think doorways, chairs, dressing cabins in shops, car interiors, etc.

With a character like jenna, you got loads of possibilities
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« Reply #21 on: Feb 23, 2006, 01:29 AM »

I'm loving these ideas, guys.  Jenna in a clothing store, barely able to move in a change stall without breaking it is really nuts.  And lifting the front of a bus?  Crazy, but maybe not sooooo crazy....

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« Reply #22 on: Feb 23, 2006, 08:53 AM »

This might be something more for chapter 5, which probably won't ever exist, but how about Jenna tries to kick her addiction. We could see her getting tempted to use her strength or build her muscles at every turn, but she tries as long as she can to resist the urge. I guess finally she would give in to her compulsion and be even more fanatical than ever about building the most freakishly developed body in history.

As for feats of strength, I have to side with the folks that say to underplay it. I like the idea of her having all of this strength for the sake of it and not feeling the need to show it off. It just has to be up to your imagination to wonder just what she is capable of.
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« Reply #23 on: Feb 23, 2006, 09:04 PM »

Yeah, I mean that could be good, if her not using her strength would actually lead to something where not only she used her strength, but she used it in creative and awe inspiring ways. Like I said before, it would be a shame for her to have all those muscles and for her not to use them in some way. I think you all know my style of writing, I don't go in much for background, I don't go for much in terms of storylines not involving strength and muscle, but I can take a chapter off, if it leads to much more of the same in the next chapter after. To me, Jenna is someone whose obsession isn't a totally bad one, she wants to make herself better, she needs to lift to get bigger, its not like gambling, smoking, or drinking, the only adverse thing is what she wants to happen, and thats to get bigger and stronger, I don't see how that can be such a bad thing.
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