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Author Topic: HARDBODY Chapter Three: The Crush (nsfw)  (Read 3940 times)
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« Reply #24 on: Feb 24, 2006, 12:56 AM »

I agree that Jenna's muscles aren't bad, though her level of obsession is pretty crazy.  The neat thing about having a psuedo realistic character is that she can be put into everyday situations that we all know and recognize.  I think it's even more sexy to see a living fantasy like Jenna interacting with average, everyday things (like school).   Greats thoughts so far everyone!

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« Reply #25 on: Feb 24, 2006, 01:31 AM »

excellent story so far Mr. Shhh, you know, it never ceases to amaze me as to how much muscle the human body can hold, even when written down or drawn. 
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« Reply #26 on: Feb 24, 2006, 02:36 AM »

oh your gooood...
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« Reply #27 on: Mar 22, 2006, 07:15 AM »

no part 4?  :cry:
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« Reply #28 on: Mar 22, 2006, 01:05 PM »

Come on Mr. Shhh, don't abandon us again, not after this great start.  :-(
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« Reply #29 on: Mar 22, 2006, 07:25 PM »

Sorry to leave everyone hanging, It was not my intention.  Real life likes to rear it's head and obliterate all of one's free time  :-(.

I've finished enough of chapter 4 that it could probably be it's own chapter.  It's not everything I intended, but it should be fine for now.  I'll post it up soon.  Promise!

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