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Author Topic: HARDBODY Chapter Three: The Crush (nsfw)  (Read 3946 times)
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« Reply #8 on: Feb 18, 2006, 02:16 PM »

Trust me, when it comes to Jenna, BIGGER is not a problem :evil:. 

The challenge going forward is finding ways for Jenna to test her strength that remain in the realm of possibility.  For instance, no matter how massive Jenna gets, she'll never lift a 747.

And another vote for Battle of the Sexes?  Yeesh!  I'll never get to that story idea about the hot, busty corproate chick who meets a massive female bodybuilder in the elevator one day...

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« Reply #9 on: Feb 18, 2006, 04:37 PM »

Hardbody is a great series, man, but Battle of the Sexes is basically what got me into this obsession with grotesquely huge and ripped muscle, and I think everyone remembers it very fondly. I would love for you to do more on Hardbody, its a shame that she doesn't get that strong, but how about some car lifting? It would be a waste for that big of muscle to be so weak! Of course she's not that weak, but I just love superstrong women, and Jenna strikes me as a carlifter. I also agree with the bigger sentiment, there is no such thing as too big, nor too ripped.
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« Reply #10 on: Feb 18, 2006, 05:32 PM »

Thanks for the awesome replies, everyone. 

I'm hard at work on chapter 4 right now.  If all goes well, it should get pretty nuts.  Once part 4 is done, I'll also be finished my innitial story arc.  At this point, if anyone has any ideas as to where they'd like to see the story go, now's the time.  Think of Jenna as your own personal super-built high school fantasy.  What would you love to see her do?

As for having artists do their interpretations of Jenna, I think it's a great idea!  If any of you artsist out there are reading this, by all means take a stab at it.  Perhaps I'll make a thread when chapter 4's done with an official request. 

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Okay, here's some ideas.

Basically from where part 3 leaves off, it can go several directions.

1) Jenna finds prince charming and they have freak sex.   (that'd be too easy)

2)  the girls and ed have plotted a prank on jenna and expose her in some cruel way (like letting her show up at his house all slutty and then embarrassing her, when ed says he'd never be interested in her)...

3)... which could lead to a fit of anger and rampage

4)... or more obsessive training

5)... or meeting the obligatory skinny nerd guy with the muscle fetish and a happy end

6) another possibility is her guy turning out to be a real asshole and using jenna who blinded by love ends up doing things that are wrong and get her in trouble.





A plot twist that gives her a cause for revenge would be cool i guess. she got the musles, lets see her use them.  And yes i agree, no 747 lifting. but she should be able to cause a good deal of damage with that body of hers.
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« Reply #11 on: Feb 21, 2006, 07:04 AM »

hi !
 i think that's a good idea if she does many feats of strength at school  to please him but that humiliates him ... so...he goes away making her to cry ...
... then he comes back on the evening, when they are alone, to ask her to do the same feats of strength in a happy end!

well, why not...

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« Reply #12 on: Feb 21, 2006, 01:12 PM »

In case y'all missed it, Pete "the Other Pete" has drawn his depiction of Jenna, and it's rather awesome: http://pdubage.deviantart.com/
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« Reply #13 on: Feb 21, 2006, 03:11 PM »

I agree, that pic was awesome! If that doesn't inspire you to write, you need to find a pulse!
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« Reply #14 on: Feb 21, 2006, 07:01 PM »

I like some of the ideas you guys have thrown out there!  Chapter 4 is pretty much set, but where it goes from there is totally up in the air.  For instance, what about a side story about Jenna's summer job on a construction site?  The idea of having our muscular heroine sweating in the hot sun while lifting outrageously heavy equipment seems like it might have potential  :roll: .  Anyone else have ideas of what crazy situations the super-massive teen can be put into?

I'm also glad people have discovered Pete's un-freakin' believable pic of Jenna  :-D!   There's also a second one in the "sketches" section of his site.  I'm going to post up a thread later in the art section for all to see.  His art is some of the most underarted stuff out there, in my opinion.  Absolutely amazing.

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« Reply #15 on: Feb 21, 2006, 07:35 PM »

Wow, construction job, that almost writes itself! I mean watching her carry I Beams around like toothpics, pulling and pushing dumptrucks around, taking a bulldozer shovel and move ground ten times faster than a bulldozer is able to. There are so many possibilities to go with, and if she gets bigger and stronger during her time there, I would love it even more.
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