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« on: May 21, 2006, 03:37 AM »

"The Monster Introduced"


He’s astounded to see Es standing at his door.
Even more astounding is the shape the Korean is in.
Her body...! Oh my God… her body!
The obvious product of mountains of iron versus an implacable, unyielding will.
Her muscles growing, growing to impossible size and hardness, growing in inconceivable strength, growing until mountains are literally lifted and iron actually bends.
Her will insurmountable, her muscles matching her will…she has built herself into a Monster.

Es is wearing her familiar pale pink T-shirt, which already had been stretched tight over her buffed body the last time he’d seen her. But now crucified on the utterly pumped-up body of The Monster, the rupturing, surrendering T-shirt is three sizes too small.

Es’ bulging traps and exploding delts are ripping shoulder seams, veritable mountains of Asian muscle tearing apart the collar.  A huge hole burst apart down her immense back displays the power and sheer size of her massive winglike lats, and a tear in the front shows striated grooves in thick pectoral slabs.

Her shoulders, chest, and back are all so freakishly BIG that the shirt’s bottom has risen up, making Es’ ripped midriff visible, and it’s a six pack – and what a six pack! Es’ deep-gridded belly is a resting six pack; an ungodly washboard of thick abdominal blocks chiseled even when relaxed!

Es drinks his wide-eyed awe of her gorilla-shaming female uberbody with obvious satisfaction and answers an unspoken question: “I broke him during sex the very first night.,” she gloats, her muscles bulging ominously, “Broke him like a toothpick.  I was too strong for him – way too strong. Too aggressive. SO strong and aggressive  I literally crushed him like an ant with my muscles.”

Es enjoys how she’s terrorizing him. “I literally crushed his entire body to, like, a gory pulp – including his dick. I totally mulched it inside of me with just my pussy muscles. I’m so strong I literally fucked him to death,” she grins viciously at the memory.

“And I’m even stronger now… MUCH stronger!” She laughs, clearly getting off on his fear, “I can work out harder than anyone -- I’m a MONSTER. I’ve surpassed everyone. No one can keep up with me in weights or cardio. I have do cardio with weights that other people can’t even lift to even get a cardio workout. Look at all these muscles... I’m so yoked!”

...to be cont'd...

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« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2006, 12:30 AM »

I absolutely love that you've nicknamed your character "The Monster".  That right there paints a picture of total bodybuilding insanity.  Can't wait to see this girl get super-freaky PUMPED!  Hulk her out, man!
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« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2006, 04:08 AM »

Funny you should say that, Mr. Shhh...
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“It’s your fault,” Es continues, sneering, “YOU were the one who pushed me to start lifting. So I’ve come to break you too…” and reaches to open the locked screen door. Impatient at the obstacle, she seizes the handle roughly, crushing it like waxpaper and without any effort whatsoever rips the screen door right off its hinges, also wrenching the door frame off like it was cardboard and tossing it behind her, snickering at its weakness.

The casual display of her violent strength is terrifying, and he tries to slam the main door shut…but is stopped by a single hand. Es casually flings the main door backwards with a simple thrust of her sculpted arm, making her blown-up triceps flex into an obscene, striated horseshoe. “…to completely crush you. Even more than him.”

That door is torn off its hinges by her effortless power, launching him off the back of the door as one would swat a fly away. The Asian musclegirl enters the house, incredible definition and size showing with each stop of her hellishly muscular trackstar legs, and laughs at how far he’s been thrown back – she wasn’t even trying.

Enjoying his shock at her unreal strength and the slack-jawed stare at the amazing muscular development that’s bursting her T-shirt apart, Es decides to completely blow his mind. “You wanna see my mmmmMUSCLES…?” she taunts, coy and sexy, “Wanna gawk at my totally BUFF BOD?”

Chuckling evilly, she takes a deep breath, causing even more tears as she truly flexes her strapping torso and expands to frightening, freaky proportions, her unleashed muscles disintegrating the T shirt as they erupt, unstoppable. “Oh yeah...” she breathes sexily, “Check me out.” Es peels off the remaining shred that barely hangs on to her mindboggling pumped contours.

Es is not wearing a bra underneath. She doesn’t need to: her little-girl Asian tits are long gone. Whatever small perky breast tissue she possessed was first plastered flat and then literally devoured by the voracious growth demands of her huge bulging slabs of fully developed pectoral muscle – her monster pecs ATE her small breasts alive, leaving only her tiny nipples to poke out girlishly amidst male-shaming pecs!

Es flaunts mindblowing pecs that any male, even professional male bodybuilders, would envy. He stares at female pecs built to such obscene size that Es’ flesh-colored nipples pout down and out, lost amongst the vast mounded slabs of shredded girl beef. Her pecs are built so granite hard that she’s entirely breastless, with permanent separations notched from her slightly stubbled armpits to her muscular cleavage.

Cleavage that extends down into the thick, deep cobblestones of a totally defined six pack. Es’ gorgeous face slowly breaks into a huge predatory smile of pure dominance as he gasps in shock and awe at the brutally built, inhumanly muscular splendor of her bare upper body. Es has no equal. She is genetically a muscle freak -- males on steroids aren’t able to achieve the ungodly mass or insane hardness Es effortlessly possesses!

He can’t believe Es’ muscles, pumped up to sizes and shapes he wouldn’t have believed possible despite her warnings how easily she gained muscle, that she was a MONSTER!  Increasingly aroused by her total superiority, Es breathes huskily, first flexing one huge sliced pec, and then its colossal mate, making each hardening nipple leap inches downward to point straight down at the floor as, insanely enough, even her rounded pecs start to show pointed peaks. Her outrageous Korean genetics have endowed her with matchless muscular potential, but it is Es herself who has stuffed and stuffed and stuffed herself with muscle and more muscle in workouts of incomparable intensity…!

She is now so ungodly strong, she benchpresses for reps what powerlifters attempt to deadlift, and easily performs single handed chinups with twice her bodyweight crushed between her legs. Endless strength oozes out of every pore of her topless body. He gasps in awe as Es moans sexily, “I’m soooo YOKED…” dangerously as she violently bounces her bare pecs, each heavy chest muscle contracting at her command, erupting into uncountable striations across every square inch of female pectoral ubermuscle.

He’s mesmerized by the thick, surfacing veins that snake unrestrained across her man-shaming chest into her shoulders and down her arms, feeding even more blood and terrifying power into ever growing girl muscles that would crush a gorilla like an ant. Her beyond-buff pecs now fully pumped into a permanently swollen state of inconceivable strength.

Es shrugs pumpkin-sized shoulders and takes a deep breath, and casually crunches her cubes, posing her supreme abs for his benefit. Her gridded belly is deeply defined even relaxed, but it now looks as if 6 jutting bricks have emerged out of her otherwise svelte stomach. She smirks, relishing his slack jaw and wide-eyed amazement. “I told you. You’ve created a MONSTER. A Monster you can’t handle – I’m SO STRONG! And now the Monster is going to CRUSH you with all her MUSCLES!”

Es takes another deep breath, filling her ribcage…and then spreads her gigantic back. Her broad-topped torso flares with even more inhuman muscle as monster lats the size of runways spread like wings beneath her arms. The sight is mindboggling -- each of Es’ lats is easily TWICE the width AND thickness of each of his, her back development far surpassing and dwarfing any males in the gym!

The Korean musclegirl languidly rolls her bulging shoulders back, turning her multitude of back muscles into breathtakingly peaked mountain ranges whose massive ridges undulate and explode into eyeboggling detail. She chuckles, enjoying showing off the spectacular hypertrophying results of her inhuman workouts and loving how much it’s frightening him.

After clenching for couple seconds to create muscular back topography so overdeveloped it would shame anatomy charts, Es spreads out her back again…and her colossal flaring body part spreads even wider than before. Another deep breath, and full inches are adding still to each of her monstrous wings. Es now looks like she could cover the sky! She grins threateningly as she flexes herself into an unearthly beast of bare-chested female Asian muscle that completely defies comparison.

A low evil chuckle escapes Es’ throat. No bra could ever hope to contain her: the thickness of her jutting gigantic chest, her mammoth, flaring back the width of the Asian continent! Es is truly a MONSTER.

...to be cont'd...
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« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2006, 02:31 AM »

Very nice! I love your descriptions. I can't wait to read more. Cheesy
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« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2006, 10:35 AM »

Glad you liked it, Abyss...here's a little more.
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 “I’m MORE than just BUFF, huh?” Shamelessly bare-chested, Es smirks and raises both bulging arms and casually coils them. In that languid double biceps pose, totally unflexed, Es already completely shames him. Her huge lats flaring out, her biceps already turning into round baseballs, her pecs still thicker than his even in this stretched position, her deep abs a resting six pack. Utterly outmatching him in size, shape, and hardness, her jaw-dropping muscles humiliate his – and she’s still unflexed. 

“Look at how BIG and RIPPED I am.” She boasts, and flexes for real. Es’ biceps explode into big jagged peaks of hardened, striated steel. She tenses further, making both jutting peaks erupt even more, stretching her skin SO tight over the granite muscleballs that long, deep separations appear in the swollen bellies of her phenomenal biceps.  Fascinated by her own incredible muscles, Es rotates her fists until each amazing biceps stands at full worship-worthy attention, her bursting monstergirl biceps becoming stunning vertical pinnacles of insane male-shaming development.

“I’ve SURPASSED buff – I’m totally BUILT!”  Es revels in the fearsome mountains of power erupting on both of her unearthly arms – most guys can’t even come close to this kind of development. As she extends her arms out and relaxes them, Es gleefully grins, “Last month these were just SIXTEEN inches UNFLEXED,” referring him to her uncoiling arms.

“That was BIGGER than your LITTLE TOOTHPICK ARMS when you’re FLEXED. Now check out REAL MUSCLE!” She flexes her towering biceps again, even harder and plays with them, pumping her ungodly arm muscles. ”EIGHTEEN inches of RAW POWER! They’re total BOYBEATERS!” Es gloats jubilantly, and unbelievably, with her arousal, her amazing Asian guns visibly get even bigger and higher and harder than before.

But she squeezes out even more unearthly expansion with her latest flex, milking even more muscle to stretch her skin to its breaking point. “Look at these muscles! TWENTY inches PLUS! My ARMS are BIGGER than your LEGS! They’re PUMPED UP -- PUMPED UP MANKILLERS!” Es exclaims proudly, checking out her mindblowing body and relishing her far superior physicality.

Her lips are pulled past her gums, her huge white teeth fully visible in a feral grin. She’s forcing him to watch her as she grows before his unbelieving eyes, sadistic aggression and pure sexual dominance arousing her, wetting her and pumping her up to gigantic proportions. "I’ve WAY, WAY surpassed you – I’m a MONSTER, and you’re just a little boy… “

“Now check out what you’re up against!” Es grasps her denim shorts and rips it and her underwear clean off with a single pull, tearing the cotton and tough denim as easily as tissue paper. She’s now proudly nude before him, flaunting a body that redefines the limits of human muscular potential. She enjoys how his mind is scrambled by the true extent of her insanely overdeveloped muscularity: beneath the wildly spreading black Asian bush, it’s obvious that even Es’ groin is absolutely HULKING with muscle!

”Is THIS where you want to put your weak little dick, bitch? You wanna feed my yoked LION?” Es laughs nastily as he pales at the sight of her mighty sex. It a wild, hairy beast that far exceeds his own groin. Her mound is built of sexual musculature so ridiculously hypertrophied that bulging, ridged muscle separations are clearly visible on even her unaroused groin!

Her clitoris can only be described as “pumped up” –  it protrudes well over an inch and packed with visible veins and unearthly muscular separations. Her clit is an unreal monstrosity fully aroused -- her monster sex organ is as big and hard as any muscle in her body, and Es’ relaxed muscles would dwarf most flexed males and buckle steel with their flexed shape! Her entire female physique is the perfect pinnacle of pure muscle. Es is a Monster!

“Can you even IMAGINE how STRONG I am now, bitch? What I can DO to you with my BARE HANDS? Or with my SEX?” The nude pumped-up Korean is clearly getting off on her dominance, grinning nastily at her own incredibly muscled groin. “I could TEAR you limb from limb – just RIP you apart, like Kleenex. That’d be SO easy…”

Her stare burns into him, predatory lust hotter than suns in her dark almond eyes. “Or I could CRUSH every BONE in your body… With my MUSCLES, I could PULVERIZE you like you’re NOTHING, bitch.” Es flexes one heavy, bulging pec up into bold, striated relief, and then the other one, demonstrating her unearthly female muscular development – development that would allow her to overwhelm for reps anyone’s maximum single lifts in the gym. Girl muscles that would viciously crush male bodies as easily as their egos. “Or I can simply FUCK you to a PULP!” Es runs her palm over her hairy muscle-packed groin, and it bulges into freakish striations in response, her cunt and literally pulsing with male-crushing power!


...to be cont'd... 

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« Reply #5 on: May 24, 2006, 02:21 AM »

...cont'd...

“I’m SO much STRONGER and more MUSCULAR than you could ever be… I’m SO BUFF I’m like, your god! Feel the muscles of your BUFF god, bitch!” Es orders. Mesmerized by her incredible bare-chested muscularity, his hands reach out by themselves to touch the naked pumped-up female muscle-mountains he instinctively knows are harder than rock.

Es reaches for him as well, and chuckles as he gasps at the feel of her arm muscles -- they’re harder than he could have even imagined! Warm, bursting steel swelling under smooth Asian skin. He’s shocked: he can literally feel the brute strength surging beneath her skin, and that strength is so far beyond his own that it would be like comparing an ocean against a teardrop. Es is literally exploding with musclepower!

He stares at her in shocked awe and she grins back dominantly as she picks lifts him easily off the ground, manhandling him effortlessly, her spectacular muscles bulging and rippling with awesome, endless might.  She abruptly flings him against the wall as easily as a rag doll, and stands over his crumpled form, muscles bursting literally everywhere.

Es reaches down and seizes him by the jaw, her immensely strong fingers threatening to crumple bone in her grip. “You haven’t SEEN my aggression yet… my DOMINANCE. I’m going to totally DOMINATE you.” As he struggles in a futile effort to break her vice-like grip, she again lifts him up effortlessly off the floor…with one hand! And with an even greater demonstration of her mindblowing muscular strength, Es easily hoists him overhead with just that one arm as she flexes her other arm into a peaked 20” monster, striking a pose of total bare-chested, no, nude domination. She chuckles in utter superiority– she’s SO STRONG he’s just an INSECT to her…

Still holding him above her by the throat with one impossibly muscular Asian arm, Es roughly rips down his pants and underwear down to his knees, tearing the cloth as easily as tissue paper. The nude Korean muscle colossus quickly flings him upward like he’s a mere toy, switching grips so she’s effortlessly suspending his helpless body directly overhead. 

She smiles condescendingly at his dangling manhood, licking her lips hungrily and showing her ominously large, razor-sharp white teeth in a fearsome grin.  Es eases him downwards, so his penis head runs along her big teeth. The sensation teases his member to grow, which it does in spite of himself: but not quickly enough for the Asian musclebeast.

“Grow, bitch, or I’ll bite it right off!” Es commands, snapping her teeth threateningly and chomping off huge bites of his pubic hair that she wolfs down as a pure protein appetizer. Impatient,  Es’ long tongue lashes out like a snake, skillfully running its tip over the sides of his sexual head, licking it like a lollipop and making him groan as he erects to his maximum length.

With a chuckle, Es opens up her mouth and eats him up – completely. She not only deep throats his fully aroused shaft, but then takes in his scrotum in her cavernous mouth, consuming his genitals in their entirety! The Asian stronggirl moans sexily, getting off on how easily she’s taken all of him in her huge, hungry mouth. Totally engulfed in her oral inferno, he explodes with the greatest volume of cum he has ever shot, but it isn’t enough for the Korean musclegod.

Like an endless vacuum, Es downs every drop and sucks lustfully for more. A deep low chuckle emanates from her as he continues to cum directly down her throat, as she effortlessly devours all his jism, her appetite absolutely insatiable. With a deep breath, her suction becomes so powerful his skin actually begins to tear!

Utterly unquenchable, Es greedily wrings his penis with her incredibly developed esophageal muscles, her mouth applying voracious bruising suction to his scrotum as her powerful tongue forcefully massages his testicles, nearly brutalizing them to pieces with just her tongue strength, milking every drop and more from him.

When he’s been completely drained and screams in agony as blood instead of semen starts to seep from him, Es slowly presses him upward, savoring every strength-giving lick. His utterly spent and mangled manhood dangling pitifully as it exits her mouth, while the Asian musclegirl smiles as her light snack fuels her to pump up even more. “I’m more than just a man-beater,” Es breathes, her nude, impossibly muscular physique emanating leviathan amounts of raw strength, “I’m a man-EATER!” she roars gleefully and flings him to the ground.

...to be cont'd...
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« Reply #6 on: May 24, 2006, 09:39 AM »

Gore is not a good description for the upcomming events...
But who cares...Wink
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« Reply #7 on: May 24, 2006, 11:49 AM »

You're right, tertio. There's actually not that much gore in this scene. (Well, compared to what Es likes to do...)
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Shaking with terror and brutalized by her overpowering oral copulation, he frantically looks around for a weapon, and his eyes settle on the crowbar he’s being using as a fireplace poker. He grabs it and scrambles to his feet, taking a stance to wields it like a baseball bat, his arms shaking and knuckles white with fear. Es bursts out laughing. “Oooh…I’m SO scared,” she smirks, and shrugs her bulging shoulders  while jutting out her huge chest intimidatingly, emphasizing her incredible muscularity.

As she advances on him aggressively, her monstrous muscles ripple and flow all over her nude Asian physique. She’s overwhelmingly powerful. He swings the crowbar as hard as he can, hitting Es in her amazing six-pack… and cries out in pain as the crowbar is jarred out of his hands as it hits something far harder than mere steel – Es’ abs!

“My abs are harder than anything in your little body, harder than steel, and you can see even my boobs and my mound are like ROCK!” Es hisses, “You can’t hurt me – I’m like totally ARMOR-PLATED with MUSCLE…!” Es crunches her cubes, making each abdominal section jut out like a mini bicep…and not just any bicep, one of her own ungodly peaked biceps. Even her abs have PEAKS! She snickers as he stares wide-eyed at her outrageously sculpted belly – a belly bristling with peaked Asian muscles like a city skyline. Es relaxes, causing her six abdominal skyscrapers to recede to merely mortal proportions, but it’s still deeper and harder than any six pack he has ever seen.

She chuckles, and picks up the fallen crowbar from the floor. The naked Korean muscle grrl places the crowbar between two incredibly chiseled rows of ab segments, and actually has to force the bar to wedge it in the crease; her resting abs are that hard. Then Es again flexes her hellishly muscle-knotted midsection, making her abdominal bricks protrude over an inch, and unbelievably, bite down and compress the trapped crowbar.

With a sexy gasp, Es crunches to one side and then the other, and she is so ungodly strong that as its metal shrieks in helpless protest,  the crowbar is mangled by her thick, undulating abs! Es’ huge grin widens as she watches his eyes pop out of his head. Grasping both ends of the crumpling crowbar, she effortlessly wrenches the half inch steel with her mercilessly strong hands, twisting it with her forearm strength alone.

And then Es exhales and fully flexes her abs, causing them to bulge and harden to such an extent that between the unstoppable jagged ridges of her mighty stomach bricks, the metal of the crowbar is crushed flat and it’s severed into three distinct pieces that clatter to the floor.

Just as amazing, two additional rows of abdominal muscle appear below Es’ navel, obvious even through the increasing fur of Es’ thick, spreading Korean bush “You saw how easily I bent that crowbar,” Es utters as he stares at her, his face quivering with fear, “I crushed it with just my abs. Your bones are like twigs to me.”

Es exults cruelly, relishing her overwhelming superiority, “I’m SO ripped! You’re totally SOFT next to me..” She advances on him, every step making a wave of muscle turn into steely striations on her quads and flaring the cannonballs of calf muscles behind her shins. The nude Asian is like an enormously muscular cat, a predator without equal. “Now beg.”
 
“Please don’t hurt me,” he whimpers, “You’re bigger, harder, stronger, faster…” Es gloats in erotic dominance as he admits her utter superiority and submits meekly to her. Her hairy muscle-packed mound drips in anticipation and twitches with fearsome power, splattering some of her scalding wetness over him.

“I am. I’m a MONSTER, and next to me you’re…a what?” she taunts, her unreal muscles bursting from every part of her nude body as she again picks him off the ground like an insect, making him squirm with fear.

“I’m just a little boy next to you.”

“Just a little boy – HA!” Es snorts derisively. She sidles up to him to compare groins, and starts to chuckle at  how superior she is even in her sex! Not only is her bush far more hairy than his, her mound is actually bigger than his scrotum. And it’s not a puny flexible sack; her vulva is a rock-solid mountain of obscenely built sexual muscle, layer upon layer of ungodly vaginal sinew ready to consume and crush whatever enters its hungry slit.

Laughing, Es snaps “I’m so BUILT, so YOKED, you’re not EVEN a little boy to me anymore! I’m more man than you are!” She again flexes an arm, demonstrating how far she outmuscles him. Horrified, he stares as her monstergirl muscles swell even further to truly amazing proportions, pumped ever bigger by the growing sexual arousal from her total superiority. The nude Korean now utterly dwarfs him in every muscle and even her sexual parts! “You’re NOTHING but  MEAT, bitch – I can literally eat you for breakfast!  I’m so MUSCULAR now, I really AM your god, huh, bitch?”

...to be cont'd...
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