This is the second story that I have writen so construstive critisism is welcomed as long as its advice to get the story flowing more smoothly. Hope you all enjoy the story.


Fraulein Panzer
Part 1

   “What a crappy Valentines day”. Rick sat at the table with a tear-streaked face, in complete shock at what had just transpired. He couldn’t believe what just happen. Rick had just been dumped by his girl friend of nine months. He met Gina at one of his friend’s houses and they hit it off almost instantly. Rick was instantly in love and asked her to go out. He was sure that this was the girl he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. He bought a ring and was ready to propose the next day during a lunch that they had schedule when all of a sudden Gina started saying that she wasn’t treating him as well as he deserved. And that she didn’t think she should see him anymore. She kept saying, “it’s not you, it’s me,” and that they could still be friends because he is such a great guy.

   When Rick asked Gina if it was because he was a virgin and didn’t initiate anything physically she assured him that that wasn’t it. Gina gave him a few reasons but Rick wasn’t really paying attention to the words she had to say anymore. He couldn’t believe that this was happening to him. Right when he thought he finally found the girl that he would spend the rest of his days with she was dumping him. After they finished eating and she told Rick how great he was a few more times Gina got up and remembered that she had to be somewhere.

   Rick was left there sitting by himself. He couldn’t help it he broke down and started to cry as he pulled out the ring he had bought and set it in front of him. It was all he could do while Gina was there to hold back the tears in front of her. Rick was so grief stricken that he didn’t notice the woman sitting in a corner table of the café who had been observing him since the moment he walked in.

   When Valda first saw Rick as he walked in she was attracted to him. “What a cutie,” she thought to herself as she sat at her table. After a few minutes she was getting ready to get up and go and talk to him when a girl cam in and sat with him. “Oh well, at least he has someone to be with for Valentines Day,” Valda thought.

It’s hard enough being an eight and a half foot muscle bound woman with super strength, but she was also a super villain known as Fraulein Panzer many years ago. So not only were people intimidated buy her large size and massively huge and rippling muscles, but when they found out that she was a super villain who doesn’t age they all but run away. It’s not like she could hide it.

About twenty-five years in the past Valda fell in love with a hero who would always try to stop her from doing her crimes. She never hurt anyone; Valda would just take what she wanted and go. The hero of her affections would show up and try to stop her but he was just a normal man who was really smart and had a lot of gadgets so he never really stood a chance against her. She would throw him around a little bit while flirting, but she wouldn’t ever do any damage more than a few bruises. When she was done flirting she would leave.
   
Then all of a sudden there was a two-week period that Valda’s “little hero”, as she so affectionately nicknamed him, didn’t show up to stop her. She started to get worried so she asked a few street contacts some questions and found out that her little hero had been beaten nearly to death and would never walk again. Valda became so infuriated that she got the name and location of the villain who hurt her hero and promptly beat the ever-living crap out of him. She then turned him and herself in to the police. She was sentenced to serve a twenty-year term in a super triple max prison. Valda had been out of jail for five years now but many people were still scared of her due to her past.

   Valda was just sitting minding her own business lost in thought when she noticed the pretty girl sitting with Rick get up and leave. As she turned and walked away his shoulders slumped as he placed something on the table and stared at it as tears started to fall from his eyes. “Oh no, she just broke up with him,” Valda said to herself. She knew all about being alone and would never wish it on anyone else. Valda felt so bad that she wanted to console him somehow. She got up and walked over. When Valda went over to his table she realized that it was an engagement ring sitting in front of him and her heart fell.

   “Would you mind if I sit down,” Valda asked. Rick didn’t respond so she moved the chair beside him away and laid down her floor mat. She was so heavy that if she sat on any normal chairs they would break instantly. It didn’t bother her though. At her height if she sat kneeling on the floor she wasn’t towering over everyone quite so much and people where more at ease around her then.

   Valda kneeled next to Rick and hugged him close. He was only vaguely aware that he had his head rested on her chest as he cried. Valda let Rick weep and held him for about ten minutes until he finally stopped and looked at whom he was been being held by. Rick looked at Valda’s chest witch was right in front of his face blinking a few times as he finally saw the two massive pectoral muscles he had been resting his head on. Due to her huge size Valda had to have all of her clothes custom made. Today she was wearing a pink spaghetti strap belly shirt with ruffles around the bottom just above her abdominal muscles witch showed off her ripped chest to the max. Valda had always figured that since she was too big to hide her physique, she might as well show off her muscles.

   Rick’s mouth dropped open and his eyes bugged out as he stared at the two slabs of muscle. Even though Valda had nothing in the way of breast, to say that she was flat chested you would actually have to be blind. The detail of each muscle fiber was prominently showing with veins covering every witch way. Rick slowly looked up past the chest. On top of the largest, most muscular set of shoulders and inhumanly muscular neck sat one of the prettiest, most feminine faces he had ever seen. “Why hello there, do you feel better now,” Valda said with a heavy German accent and a comforting smile. Valda’s Voice wasn’t the deep masculine sounding voice you would expect from someone her size. As a matter of fact it was very feminine and girly. She had shortly cropped blond hair with log bangs and a little nose stud on her left nostril. To top it all off she wore a pair of glasses that added to friendly appearance of her bright blue eyes.

   Rick looked at the wet spot that his crying had made on Valda’s shirt and got a fearful look on his face. “I am so sorry about your shirt,” Rick said looking up at Valda with a scared expression.

   Valda placed a finger up to his mouth. “Oh shoosh. I was the one who held you remember. You looked so sad and alone I felt the need to help,” she said as she smiled down at Rick. “Besides, you’re so cute I wanted to cuddle with you a little bit,” Valda added as she blushed and gave Rick a little squeeze.

   Rick timidly brought his hands up to Valda’s left arm and started to explore. It was the most amazing contrast he had ever felt on a woman. Her skin was so soft and smooth but it was covering the hardest most grotesquely detailed muscles he had ever felt. Valda’s arm felt like silk covered boulders to Rick. “You sure are… healthy,” Rick said trying to find the right words. Valda just giggled and slowly flexed her arm. Rick’s eyes got wide with surprise as he watched what he thought was an already huge arm bulge to an obscenely as to peak of the bicep rose over half way up the distance of her forearm. Rick was so completely engrossed in exploring the rippling detail and veins with his fingers that he didn’t realize that he was getting an erection.

   “Thank you. I do try to stay in good shape,” Valda said as she made note of his arousal. She knew that with her reconstructed genetic makeup that she could never actually get out of shape. When she worked her body it only got stronger and didn’t deteriorate with time. “What’s your name sweetie”?

   “Rick,” he said meekly.

   “Well Rick I would really love to stick around and snuggle with you some more, but I have to go and meet some people about some work. If you ever need a big healthy woman to cuddle with again, give me a call,” Valda smiled as she slipped him her card.
She gave him a tender kiss in his forehead and got up and left. This was the first time Rick had seen Valda standing at her full height. Wile seated he only came to about mid thigh level to her. As she walked away Rick watched in complete awe as he saw Valda’s legs and back. Her back was almost completely bare and was a mass of rippling power. She had a tiny waist witch led to strong hips. Valda was also wearing a tight mini skirt witch did nothing to hide a lower body that was no less massive and ripped as her upper body. Even a little thing like walking sent ripples of muscle flowing throughout her entire person like a symphony in complete harmony.

Rick looked down at the card. It read “Power House Incorporated. If you need a doctor with a little muscle don’t call me. But for a doctor with a lot of BIG ones, give me a call because I’m your girl”. Rick turned the card over and it had her name, Dr. Valda Schlierkamp, and her phone number with a big lipstick kiss mark. Rick found her erotically attractive but like so many others was extremely intimidated buy her. He wasn’t sure if he would call her or not but she did make him feel better when he was down. “Maybe I’ll give her a call sometime,” Rick thought to himself. “I deserve to go out and have some fun after what happened today”.



Two days later, Rick was sitting in his living room doing some research for his latest project. He had always been scientifically gifted. Rick loved to invent and build things and his latest project had been put on hold for his ex-girlfriend. Now that he was single he thought that it would be appropriate for him to start up his research again. Ok, so he really didn’t have a living room. It was more like a break area. Rick lived in a large warehouse that had all of his experiments in it.

Rick had the TV local news on in the background and just happened to look up. On the screen was the familiar face of Valda on his screen. “In Freedom city today there was an attempted bank robbery at the Freedom Mutual Credit Union. This woman stepped in and stopped the four person group known as the Factor Four from getting away. She was able to subdue the criminals with minimal property damage. Here is the footage from the security video feed,” the newscaster reported with the typical newscaster smile.

It looked like a typical day in the bank accept there was an eight and a half foot tall hulking woman standing in line getting some strange looks. Rick noticed it was Valda. All of a sudden there seemed to be a strong gust of wind that knocked everyone but Valda down who instantly went to help some of the people up. The revolving door of the bank was suddenly smashed in as an eight foot tall man made of stone ignored the gunshots of the guards who opened fire upon seeing him. Granite, the stone man, walked up to the safe and ripped it open. Then Pyre, a man of flame, entered the new opening in the front of the bank and melted the guards guns burning there hands in the process.

Valda had seen enough. She said something to Granite who whorled a round and charged her. When he got close enough he struck her chin. She didn’t even attempt to avoid or block the blow. When it connected with her Granite’s arm shattered from the elbow down. He stood stunned and confused at what had just happened as Valda struck his abdominal area witch crumbled as both of his legs fell off. Granite fell to the ground and was trying to use his one good arm to crawl away when Sylph, a woman made of air, appeared behind Valda and enveloped her in a gas of some kind. At first Valda seemed unaware but then noticed the wispy figure behind her. With a smile she suddenly took a deep intake of breath. Sylph started to panic and tried to get away but was inhaled by Valda who then looked at Pyre as he was flying towards her to help his team mates. Valda then exhaled. With the strength of her lungs and the help of Sylph, Pyre was extinguished. Both of the would be bank robbers fell to the ground knocked out.

This all happed in less than eight seconds witch was about the time Professor Fathom, a man made of water, entered and was startled by the sight of seeing his group already defeated by one woman. Before he even had a chance to react, Valda grabbed the large safe door and smashed it down on the liquid man, splattering him everywhere.

The TV then went back to the anchorman “that was the scene today. We have tried to get a statement from the police for more information and they have refused to comment on the incident. There will be an in-depth investigation on this new super powered woman who now seems to reside in Freedom City. For more details tune in tonight at ten. Back to you bob”.

Rick sat and down looked at the card that Valda had given him. “Wow. And she wants to go out with me”? Rick decided to give her a call and go out and have some fun. His problem was where do you take a girl like Valda out to? 



Valda was so happy as she hung up the phone. She had been alone for so long it was going to be nice to go out on a date with someone of the opposite sex. Rick actually called her and asked to go out dancing. Valda told Rick that she would meet him at the club. She had found an all supers club a few months back but never had anyone to go with before. You could gain admission as long as you were or someone you were with was a metahuman or registered super hero. Valda could take Rick there and not feel too out of place.

Valda decided to ware something that would let as many off her muscles hang out as possible. Rick seemed to like her arms when she flexed for him before. Valda found a black party dress in her wardrobe and put in on looking at herself in the full length mirror. It was sleeveless with an open back. There was a large peek a boo window on the chest area so her ripped pecs would be seen by all. The dress was very tight so all of the muscles in her abdominal would be prominently noticeable. The skirt of the dress went down to about mid calf but had two very large slits on either side that started all the way at the top of her hips. They went down in an inverted v shape so both of her powerfully muscled legs were in view. For shoes she found her six inch black stiletto heels witch put her height at an even nine feet tall. “I love the way these shoes make my calves look,” Valda smiled as she turned and looked at her massive calf muscles become ridged and bulge when she flexed them.

“This is the one. It’ll knock his socks off,” Valda thought to herself with a large smile. She then proceeded to do some bodybuilding poses in the mirror. Her dress was made of a special fabric that was like silk but could stretch three times as much as spandex. Valda used to always have to be careful about flexing her huge physique out of fear of destroying her clothing until she found out who to talk to about getting clothes specially made with this cloth. She grabbed her purse and walked out the front door of her large house.

Part 2 has already been started.

Yeah I know my spelling sucks  it has always one of my weaknesses and unfortunately spell check only checks the spelling of a word not its proper use. 

Very promising!  I look forward to part 2.