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Author Topic: The Muscles of Mercy (NSFW; very gory)  (Read 25728 times)
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« Reply #24 on: Jul 20, 2007, 05:07 PM »

Oh man - the suspense is killing me! Marvelous!
This guy really likes to live dangerous! She just crushed his hand, he holds a file where all sort of terrible things stand about her and he attempts to slap her in the face. Not very bright for an educated man if you ask me!  Grin
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« Reply #25 on: Jul 20, 2007, 06:53 PM »

Jesus this story is just getting better and better ^_^ and yeah the suspense is killing me, too.
If she was that strong with only 6 years... how terrifyingly strong must she be now?
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« Reply #26 on: Jul 20, 2007, 07:09 PM »

Strong enough that attempting to slap her- for therapeutic reasons or otherwise- is probably not one of the better ideas the good doctor ever had... >Smiley

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This guy really likes to live dangerous! She just crushed his hand, he holds a file where all sort of terrible things stand about her and he attempts to slap her in the face. Not very bright for an educated man if you ask me!

Y'know, I had nearly the exact same thought...

Actually, my thought kind of ran along the lines of: Hm.  I have this file describing the ways this girl has brutally killed people with her bare hands.  Whether I believe it or not, I'm not about to allow myself to be alone in a room with her.  I want SWAT team backup, preferably with a sniper on the roof half-a-mile away and a big-@$$ gun...
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« Reply #27 on: Jul 20, 2007, 08:31 PM »

Awesome writing reap! I thought it was going to be good, but it blew away my expectations by a great deal, man I hope to see her test her young strength against older males in a more direct fashion, if you know what I mean?!  Shocked
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« Reply #28 on: Jul 21, 2007, 01:13 AM »

Ya'll are absolutely correct... you wouldn't be caught dead (poor choice of words) alone with this girl, but there are a lot of docs who have this God-complex of infallibility and untouchability. And as you well know, education is not a substitute for common sense. SO as you might expect, this stupidity is going to be ... heh heh heh

And Jeremy, I might have an idea what you mean, just keep reading...

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« Reply #29 on: Jul 21, 2007, 04:38 AM »

awesome. really that is a great part. your descriptions so vivid
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« Reply #30 on: Jul 21, 2007, 06:34 AM »

What interests me is what makes her "tick"? Until now she is shown as shy, polite and even very disciplined.  I wonder if she is schizophrenic and goes ballistic when she hears certain words or comes into certain situations? Sort of a conditioned reflex?
I also wonder how this doctor is able to continue his interview with her with a crushed hand. I imagine it must hurt like hell, to have every single bone in your hand  crunched like a dry leaf. I really have no sympathy for this idiot. Anyone so foolish deserves death. It's like if you were to go swimming in shark infested waters with open wounds.
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« Reply #31 on: Jul 21, 2007, 10:08 AM »

More more!
awsome, thanx.
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