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Author Topic: The Muscles of Mercy (NSFW; very gory)  (Read 25726 times)
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« Reply #8 on: Jun 29, 2007, 07:59 AM »
Awesome! Love it! The description of her walking down the corridor - *moan*!
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« Reply #9 on: Jun 29, 2007, 02:45 PM »
Great, great story, man, I can't wait to see what Mercy is truly capable of, I'm sure it will blow me away!
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« Reply #10 on: Jun 29, 2007, 06:05 PM »
And again really great ^_^the speed of narration is very good. It could become one of my favorite stories from you.
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« Reply #11 on: Jul 02, 2007, 11:41 PM »
Wow, this is great stuff so far. Definitely looking forward to the next part!
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« Reply #12 on: Jul 03, 2007, 12:57 AM »
Dyamn man this is THE best story from you so far, technically... perfect narration , and pace i LOVE it!  I cant wait what next is going to happen Wink
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« Reply #13 on: Jul 03, 2007, 08:37 PM »
Wow, I am very appreciative of all your comments... but I fear that the rest of the story will not live up to all your expectations!

As you all know, the hardest part of writing for many people is not the idea or its beginnings, but the continuing and finishing of it. "The Muscles of Mercy" is no different. Those of you who have read my other stuff know that my protagonists are antiheroes. Mercy is a very disturbed character... and for even more disturbing reasons. Those of you who are not used to depravity, the "(NSFW and very gory)" are in the subject line for a reason.

No matter how gratified I am that you like my writing style or descriptivity (I really am humbled!) and continue reading for that purpose alone, please be aware:

The slaughter is coming.

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« Reply #14 on: Jul 04, 2007, 03:48 AM »
Is there any chance that you will one day write a story and invent a "nice" character  with the proportions of Mercy? Or are antiheroes your only genre?

I don't know what you or the others think of the idea, but what about a story where "Es" and "Mercy" have to fight it out to the finish?

Although I have my problems with the character of your antiheroes I still love your stories - how you build up the suspense, keep people guessing, letting their own imagination run wild while they wait for the next part.
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« Reply #15 on: Jul 04, 2007, 02:12 PM »
Hey Reaper, i really hope the slaughter is comming XD Grin
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