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« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2008, 07:58 PM »
demented20,

Thanks for this fine tale.

Addison was a well developed character to the point of me merely disliking her for the somewhat decisive way she turned Roger out of her life. The emotional antagonist was written with such skill and clarity of motivation that the ones more focused are all the more convincing.

Can't wait to see where you take this. It's nice to see that Roger is able to accept another's kindness while Megan finds someone that can take some of the Type A out of her day.  Cool
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« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2008, 05:32 AM »
Amazing story there. The plot the setting and the characters are well described. Such a work of art like Megan.
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« Reply #10 on: May 14, 2008, 11:23 AM »
Great job, that was a really well written part 1, I hope the conclusion lives up to the hype that's obviously built up here!
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« Reply #11 on: May 14, 2008, 01:04 PM »
Excellent story!
The build up is interesting and the characters well described.
Thanx for sharing and posting
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« Reply #12 on: May 14, 2008, 03:59 PM »
Thats definately one of the most beautiful stories i've ever read.
All i can say is thanks for writing this.
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« Reply #13 on: May 14, 2008, 04:37 PM »
Very good story!

I don't even dislike Addison. They are different people, not meant to be together. She obviously needed someone more high-powered and energetic like her, and he needs someone more laid-back but still willing to push him to be better. Good thing he found Megan, or she found him!
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« Reply #14 on: May 14, 2008, 05:42 PM »
Excellent story !!!!
There is another part??
I can't wait!!
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