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Author Topic: Jenny and the Cube (new interactive fiction)  (Read 2469 times)
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dr_muscles
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« on: Jul 08, 2008, 02:25 PM »
I just started (and I mean just started) an interactive fiction. Read, enjoy, add chapters, etc.:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1445377

Oh, and please let me know if you like it, or have any suggestions or comments.
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« Reply #1 on: Jul 09, 2008, 03:58 PM »
Very good so far.  Keep up the good work.  A "choose your own adventure" for adults is a lot of fun!
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« Reply #2 on: Jul 09, 2008, 05:35 PM »
Thanks peirrotlunaire.

I just finished all the chapters down to depth 3 (seven in total), but I'm going to need help before too long to get any farther. Stupid binary trees just keep doubling in size.
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 11, 2008, 06:00 AM »
It looks like its turning out to be very good,but most of the paths end in the same way.otherwise,good writing!
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« Reply #4 on: Jul 11, 2008, 01:48 PM »
Yeah... It's the trap of having to come up with 4 different parrallel storylines at once. Once again, I would remind you that (if I have my settings right) this story can be freely added to.
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« Reply #5 on: Jul 14, 2008, 06:14 AM »
Unless you weave them back together, there'll be more than 4 storylines... The number of storylines will double with every additional level!

The work is, so far, great. I would have liked to see you develop it as a traditional story.
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