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Author Topic: Mighty Princess Shara, and Valensia, the Praetorian Mistress of Strength  (Read 2653 times)
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« on: Jul 11, 2008, 02:44 PM »

As I may have mentioned before in my Vashti Vice picture in the Superheroines & Fan Art section, I plan on writing webcomics when I get my graphics tablet. What I didn't mention though, is that I will not just make one series. The series that Vashti will be in is mostly action-oriented, with only three muscle girls in the cast.

However, one of the other series, called "Mighty Princess Shara", will focus mostly on muscular women and amazons etc.

Here's a short backstory if you're interested...

~.:Story:.~
The story takes place some time in the future, in the midst of a new dark age for most of the world. Society is becoming less and less civilized, and mankind has begun to use extremely pollutive methods to power their technology. The only reason the earth hasn't deteriorated is because of the beautiful, pristine jungle island of Krotaia, and their use of ecoforce, an energy that comes from the activity of nature itself. They have secretly used this ecoforce to create the Life Sphere, which lies underneath their island, absorbing much of the pollution and dispelling it to nothing...

One day, a man by the name of Lord Valmonte came to Krotaia in hopes of expanding his industrial empire, and convincing the king to let him build factories on his island. The king sternly rejected, and as a result, was attacked by Valmonte's forces. His daughter, Shara tried to stop them, but by the time she got to him, he was severely wounded (which would bring him to his comatose state). Valmont then found out the Krotaians' secret of the Life Sphere, and then stole it.

Shara escaped the palace and hid in a small cave somewhere in the vast forest that extended throughout the island. While there, she was suddenly overcome by a blinding flash of light. A deep, raspy, yet obviously female voice began speaking to her from the light. When the light lessened some, Shara saw a tall, pale, extremely muscular woman hovering in mid-air before her. She told her that her name was Valensia, the Praetorian "Mistress of Strength". Now, Praetoria was a mystery to all normal mankind. What is known is that they are far superior to the average human, and live in an elaborate floating realm somewhere in the sky. Many myths about them circulate. Some say they may be otherworldly or supernatural beings of some sort, and the people admire them as such...

Valensia arrived with two large, glowing spheres floating beside her, and binded to her by very ornate chains. The "Pearls of Light and Darkness", as she called them, were tethered to her to keep her from returning to Praetoria, from where she was banished for commiting some sort of horrendous act.

Valensia then told Shara that she chose her to help her get her revenge on the Praetorians, whether she wanted to or not. Painfully filling her with her power, Valensia transformed Shara into a powerful muscular woman, and now tries to force her to do her bidding. Shara decided to use her new powers to return the Life Sphere to it's rightful home... However, little does she know that she will soon find out the secrets of the Praetorians as well...

Now, without further ado...

~.:Characters:.~


~.:Shara:.~
The princess of the island of Krotaia. A beautiful young woman with very dark skin and a smooth, calm voice, Shara never wanted to be muscular, and isn't very pleased with her new body. However, after being forcefully cast under Valensia's power, Shara became a tall, mighty amazon with enough strength to lift about 5 tanks at once and a body hard enough to withstand being hit by a speeding bullet train. Although she harbors some animosity towards her body, she does seem to enjoy having it carressed and oiled up much more than she did before she became muscular.

~Note:~ Shara's muscles in this picture look a bit tighter and not as relaxed as Valensia's because of the sudden growth of them. In the first three issues her muscles twitched almost constantly, were very tight, stiff, and cramped very often. However, after her body adjusted, her muscles relaxed a bit, and she has experienced some relief. In the comic, Shara is almost always oiled.



~.:Valensia:.~
Formerly the Praetorian "mistress of strength", Valensia has the power to give strength to, and take strength away from others with direct contact. She stands at roughly 7 feet, 2 inches tall, and has a body harder than solid steel. Bullets have been flattened upon impact with her. She has very pale skin and a raspy voice, and has very thick veins that visibly throb as her blood pumps through them. (Although on this picture I forgot to draw them... sorry! ^^;) She is very domineering, and when she's in her secret palace, she is always being oiled and caressed by one or more of her servants. She has given her power to 17 other women who Shara must battle against. She is bound by the "Pearls of Light and Darkness", two giant, floating spheres that prevent her from entering either the dark side of Praetoria or the Light side.




Okay, that's about it... Comments please ^^
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« Reply #1 on: Jul 13, 2008, 06:35 AM »

A damned fine start!

The line work on the first one seems a bit rough, but it looks like it was drawn small and blown up a lot; that'd explain it.

Looking forward to more from you.
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« Reply #2 on: Jul 14, 2008, 11:47 AM »

I love your concepts so far!  The drawings of both are iteresting.  I like the look of the Praetorian with her floating spheres.
I am curious what adventures you have in store for them.  If they just get anointed with oil that is okay too, though.
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 16, 2008, 01:48 PM »

I love your concepts so far!  The drawings of both are iteresting.  I like the look of the Praetorian with her floating spheres.
I am curious what adventures you have in store for them.  If they just get anointed with oil that is okay too, though.


If all goes as planned, they're gonna be going on a lot of adventures, some of which involving Shara trying to get the life sphere back, fighting the other amazons in sexy catfights and uncovering the secrets of the Praetorians...

...But shouldn't you  already know that if you looked at the descriptions..? ^^;
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« Reply #4 on: Jul 20, 2008, 06:20 PM »

 Smiley Very promising. And the art is great.
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« Reply #5 on: Nov 01, 2008, 01:19 AM »

Smiley Very promising. And the art is great.

Thanks!

It seems that you can't edit posts with replies under them on this site, so I'll just add something here that I forgot to add in the original post;

Since Valensia brings about so much terror to the residents of Krotaia, there have been many attempts to assasinate her, many of which involved seeking to slice open or puncture her massive veins. However, the last warrior sent to defeat her (who also happened to be the only one who managed to actually get a close-range blow off of her) tried this, only to discover that her flesh itself seems impervious to many catalysts of damage. He first stabbed her deep into her immensely vascular bicep with his sword, then pulled it down the length of her arm and watched in horror as the wound healed instantly right behind the blade's path! She, in turn, made short work of him by grabbing him by the collar and hurling him into the wall with inhuman force, smashing the life out of him.
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