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Re: Blind Date Part 1

« Reply #8 on: Jul 17, 2008, 07:25 PM »

Cool story BUT you seriously need to format your stories so that they're easier to read.

In the future, please separate out each paragraph by putting an entirely blank line (like the one above...) between each paragraph. Also whenever anyone says anything and it's in "Quotes" again a new paragraph with a blank line separating it.

It'll make it soooo much easier to enjoy the story!

Thanks!


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