Jeb you got to go where the money is, Its great that we get fantastic art in the process, I mean I had first dates and the first thing I hear when I came in the front door was.........
Spank me!
there some things that are funny I forget who did it, one artwork had Titanna  tieing up she hulk and shipping her to some place I mean Thats FUNNY!!

AND WOW I can't wait,to see these stories
 You Know I went to see MY SUPER EX-GIRL FRIEND. when it came out what a dreadful movie!!!
Thurman totally worng for the part .Instead of showing the love and problems of haveing to split your time between a lover and saving the world. They took the worst aspects of a relationship and turn it on its ear a 1,000 fold.!

I thought the title makes it pretty clear that the movie isn't about her or a relationship. Especially the with the "ex" part in it. I think most guys have had the experience of the psychotic girlfriend from hell that just won't go away. Imagine if she had super powers. 

Unfortunately, the movie WAS pretty bad. 

It's a little bit better. But I think I can give you something that you can build on if you are so inclined.

Your muscle girl is a tool and a slave of war and violence. So far she is a cardboard cutout. Here is what I propose.

All the while she is being controlled as an instrument of war, she can see and feel all of her actions but is totally powerless to stop. "No", is not a word she can utter. For all of the elapsed time, she desperately wants to  be free. She resents bitterly all her power for it has gained her nothing but a life of servitude to one master after another. Each one a psycho of one stripe of another.

A simple bit of symbolism could be summed up with a short scene of her witnessing a puppet on a string doing an act, and her sympathy going out to that little bit of wood and cloth and a burning rage at the puppet master. The scene could be totally innocent for all who see it, except her because she is living that puppets life.

At some point that ring falls into what the gods would consider the wrong hands. A mortal. For a brief time she is allowed to exists without being ordered about. This could be as simple an an accident because the mortal doesn't know what he or she posses and how to use it, or it could be deliberate. Maybe beacuse he or she feels sorry for her. For her, this is the first time she has experienced an act of kindness. It overpowering.

And then the gods catch up with her and her new mortal master. The powerful weapon in the hands of a mortal is totally unacceptable. She will be made to serve the gods or else.

(Let me pause here for a moment. We could go straight to a fight where she uses her brief bit of freedom to save this mortal and end it here with either a victory or a loss, but this would be a pretty weak story if we went there. To have a powerful story she needs to be boxed into a corner. Not necessarily physically, but mentally. To make this story strong she needs to be put into a moral dilemma. In short she needs to have 2 stark choices placed before her. One choice gives her what she wanted form the story start, and it's easy to obtain. We give her freedom at little cost. The other choice should give her a total disaster. Perhaps she not only becomes a slave again, but she also must suffer a permanent state of hell where her soul burns in agony as a punishment the gods will meet out to her. The final conflict could be as simple as what I propose)

To be free she must kill the bearer of the ring. If she can do this she will be free. Not only that, she will also be the most powerful of all the gods. It looks like a win win for her.

But the mortal currently wears the ring. He or she can not, or will not control her, so the killing will be supremely easy. But this is the only person in all of creation who has ever shown her kindness. The only person who has trusted her. The only one to see past the power to love what lies beneath all the muscle. To do this she will be killing that trust, and the only thing that ever loved her.

The other option is to fight the gods, knowing that eventually her master will die, and she will be at their mercy, only this time she will suffer as she has never suffered before.

Now she must choose.

From here we have our climatic scene. She will be rewarded or punished according to poetic justice. If she chooses well, she wins her most important goal, (not necessarily freedom) She'll win that inner mental state of being morally right. It might translate into a physical victory for her or it might not. All depends on how it's handled. If she chooses wrong she get's her just rewards. Perhaps she wins her freedom, but suffers a mental hell. Perhaps she actually looses all, including physically. In the end she will demonstrate if she deserves to win or if she deserves to loose.


Anyway, that's a very rough idea of what could happen. The key here is to elaborate on the muscle girl, create a goal that she must strive for. Smack her down a few times, and ultimately force her into a moral choice.

Agreed. I'll hand this of to you. It's your idea and the details should be yours to create. Maybe Jeb will even draw it when it's all done.