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Author Topic: The Guitar Hero Complex (part one)  (Read 428 times)
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« on: Sep 24, 2008, 05:58 PM »

I've decided to write about an interesting new way to grow. Sorry that its short so far, but if I try to post it in big chunks I get excited and try to write more and wing it due to wanting to get out to the public. I'm also sorry that I cut it off right before a good part.

All that aside, here it is so far.

http://brawna.org/stories/the-guitar-hero-complex

(Feedback and suggestions are greatly appreciated, even nice criticism.)
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« Reply #1 on: Sep 24, 2008, 10:45 PM »

Am interesting start...as a writer I must suggest that when you write dialogue...seperate it on individual lines...that way its easier to foloow other then that...sounds promising.
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Somehow, wether intentional or not you managed to screw up my day! Thanks alot ^^;
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