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Author Topic: Eleanor by Morpheus  (Read 2129 times)
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« on: Oct 21, 2008, 11:19 AM »

I'm really surprised he or somebody else hasn't already posted this, but this is definitely a classic FMG story, with the added benefit of being immensely readable other than the FMG scene.

http://brawna.org/stories/eleanor

I hope I'm not the only one who enjoyed this story.
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« Reply #1 on: Oct 21, 2008, 09:48 PM »

That was a very good story.
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« Reply #2 on: Oct 21, 2008, 11:56 PM »

Make sure to post comments so Morpheus writes more stories for us!

Also, go join his Yahoo! group and tell him there, also: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Morpheuscabinet2/
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« Reply #3 on: Oct 22, 2008, 01:01 PM »

Surely the purpose of Brawna is that we can let the festering uselessness of Yahoo groups die a death?

Good stuff... but rather more of a scene, than a story. I suppose that can be considered good or bad.
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« Reply #4 on: Oct 25, 2008, 04:05 PM »

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? Wink

The "What's happening to me?" comment always does it for me, so I was hooked right there. I would have liked Ellie to be more vocal about her transformation and for the growth itself to be more detailed. All in all though, quite nice.
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« Reply #5 on: Nov 20, 2008, 01:04 PM »

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? Wink

Those freakin' gypsies!  I read it again last night and I really enjoy it.
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« Reply #6 on: Nov 20, 2008, 07:12 PM »

Hey!!!  I'm a gypsy...  Or at least my anscestors were.  Grin 
So, if any of y'all need any of that vitality potion, come find me in my wanderings.  If you can!  Wink
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