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Author Topic: ericka the beast - part i (new story)  (Read 1453 times)
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darkscribex
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« on: Jun 05, 2009, 06:43 AM »
Hello all. I've been lurking these forums a while and I'm a big fan of female muscle. I finally decided to try my hand at some fiction. Enjoy.

http://brawna.org/stories/ericka-beast-part-i
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« Reply #1 on: Jun 05, 2009, 08:52 AM »
Edited and uploaded an additional section. I must say, writing this was an...interesting experience. And enjoyable. Part II should follow soon.
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« Reply #2 on: Jun 07, 2009, 07:33 AM »
part ii is up. Anybody care to comment? I'd love some feedback.
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« Reply #3 on: Jun 07, 2009, 07:55 AM »
Very nice story so far. Looking forward to hearing what she's going to do next (probably mayhem) and how big she's going to get.
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« Reply #4 on: Jun 08, 2009, 06:40 PM »
Reposted from Brawna:

I like it!

It's a crazy story, full of crazy people. I somehow enjoy it.
Besides, will Tanya reappear? She might be available for some competitive growth/revenge, mightn't she?
Please write on!
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« Reply #5 on: Jun 10, 2009, 05:09 PM »
I wanted to congratulate you on the overwhelming awesomeness of your story!  He's the comment I posted on Brawna:
 
First off, as a piece of first-time fiction your writing is extremely clear and descriptive. You seem to be a natural writer. The story itself is so packed with the stuff I love it's almost crazy. I've never been a fan of magical muscle growth, so I was thrilled to see how hard Erika struggles to forge her dream physique. I particularly like how far you push things - clothes bursting, popping veins, tit-less pecs - this is female muscle pushed to the max! Can't wait to read more!
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