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« on: Jul 28, 2009, 02:59 AM »
Hi there. I've been reading female muscle fiction and writing for leisure for years. I figured it was about time I put these two interests of mine together and finally create my own piece of work. This is my first foray into this category of writing, so comments on my descriptions ('cause hey, that makes the story, right?) are especially appreciated.

http://brawna.org/stories/roomies
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« Reply #1 on: Jul 29, 2009, 10:04 AM »
I liked it - a good start made. Keep going!
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« Reply #2 on: Jul 29, 2009, 12:23 PM »
I usually look for FMG themed stories because those are my fav. This one doesn't appear to be one of those, but it looks like it may be going more toward the "muscle seduction" theme? Those can be good too. I will keep a watch out for more.  Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 29, 2009, 05:05 PM »
Oh, growth is definitely my favorite sub-genre too and I definitely plan to write some of that. I just figured that for my first try, I should make sure I have a good grasp of describing muscle before I throw another dynamic (growth) into it. I'm feeling pretty confident thanks to you two.

I should have another part up soon (< week).
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« Reply #4 on: Jul 29, 2009, 11:09 PM »
I approve too :-).
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« Reply #5 on: Jul 30, 2009, 07:48 PM »
Did I estimate a week? I should give myself more credit.

http://brawna.org/stories/roomies-part-ii
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« Reply #6 on: Jul 31, 2009, 12:07 AM »
A+!  I like where this is going.
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« Reply #7 on: Jul 31, 2009, 07:22 AM »
They're just aren't enough tender and innocent stories like this in this genre. Please keep it going.
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