I thought the same thing about the religious angle.  As for the story in Portuguese, after reviewing it, mine is actually becoming quite different with the exception of the mechanism fueling her growth. All of my characters, as noted before, are in their 30's-50's as well.

Here's an exchange where Ms. Quintada has a run in with some divine messengers after she had as an encounter with a streetwalker:

Turning, her job now done, Ms. Quintada began to walk back to her car. Feeling invigorated, she decided to cut through a dark alleyway as a short cut. As she got halfway through, a tall figure emerged in front of her. The figure, which appeared to be a 6’4 man, was dressed in a long, dark trench coat. In the shadows, his skin appeared to be a pale white. His face, looked scarred and tired with sorrow. His forehead, adorned was stress lines, was topped with white hair. However, it was his eyes which caused Ms. Quintada to gasp in alarm. They were pure white.

Seconds, which seemed like years passed. Finally the man spoke in a whisper, the voice of thousands speaking at once. “Ms. Quintada, I bring you a warning.”

“A warning?” she cringed.

“God requires the prayers of the faithful so that his will may continue to be done in the Universe. The sins of unbelievers weaken his power to act upon the hearts of men and influence the world. You have been chosen. You have been given the keys to the heavenly kingdom to further his will, yet you are walking a dark path.”

“What are you talking about?!” she cried. “Who are you?!”

“I serve the throne of Heaven…” he looked down at her.

“Are you an angel?” she asked.

He nodded.

She looked at the being's face. He doesn’t look like an Angel, she thought. He actually looks demonic. He can’t be an angel. I know what an angel is. He must be a demon! she thought as her heart raced. “You’re a liar! You’re trying to mislead me from God’s path. I,” she pointed at herself, “Serve God. I will return them to heaven by God’s command. You be gone!” she screamed.

The man buckled at her command and fell to one knee. He looked up at her weakly, “You have been given free will to do either good or evil and the power you have been given cannot be taken once given. You must choose how you use the power and your faith. That is the law  that the creator bound himself with at the hour of creation. It cannot be broken by his hand. Know this, you threaten the Kingdom. Choose wisely.”

“Be gone. Demon. I reject your presence,” she said forcefully. The man began to flicker in and out of existence and fell to both knees. Holding his chest in pain, he looked up, “Lord! She was the wrong choice… the wrong choice!”

“BE GONE DEMON! I REJECT YOU!” she screamed, righteous fury and anger strengthening her command. The being thrashed on the ground and lifted his hands to his ears and screamed an unholy howl before elemental forces tore him to shreds in a fury of light. His molecules exploded.

Ms. Quintada stood, her heart racing. It was a demon! A demon! I am doing God’s work. I have no doubt of it now. I will not be deterred!

and the heaven unleashes the hell's fire!!!

I remember writing about this church lady, I tried to write a comedy, or satire, I'm not sure. It's not easy for me to write comedy in english and it sounded so funny in portuguese.

If I can remember right, the church lady, Ms.Quitanda was praying constantly for the lord asking him to make her family to attend the church, to stop saying profanities and to be like her, a church lady, and one day praying at the church’s altar suddenly the big large wooden cross fell over her head which started her unusual powers.

What happens next, I believe, was that the church lady mixed up her new strange powers with a miracle from the heavens, she had visions in the hospital while in bed. I wrote it very ambiguously of course.  She started to think that she could feel other people's sins, which in reality was a supernatural antenna to sense attraction to her own body, a body that started to morph from 50 old conservative lady to a sexy (conservative) beast. I started to call her Esmeralda by this point, her first name, and a sexier one too.

That was the hidden secret of this story, that what triggers her growth wasn't the lord’s praise, but was the dirty thoughts from everyone around gawking at her body that grew more voluptuous and muscular day by day; in a vicious cycle, her heavenly body grew more and became more sensual creating even more dirty thoughts which she sensed as sins that needed to be punished by making them praying harder for repent.

The poor victims of Esmeralda were all trying to repent of desiring her massive toned legs, or thinking of her deep cleavage, or of her powerful body, but it all just reinforced their dirty thoughts over her body, making her strange powers to get stronger and her growth to accelerate. She felt all this sexual force nourishing  her in the prayers as a lord’s reward for making them to repent their sexual impulses over her. And she uses those powers to make, not only her family, but the entire city to repent their sins of wanting her. In the end, I think, it is not written, is that she becomes so powerful that begins to believe that she's God itself, and creates her personal Hell and Heavens and calls the judgment day over the entire humanity, judging one by one. Oh, the humanity.

Phew... I didn't remember that was that complex... it was hot, I think I even start to read it again now...

CaptMalcomReynolds you are free to do whatever want to do, as anyone else, create your own twist, do as you feel like. I don’t mind at all. We don’t have FMG stories enough, never will, I guess. Glad that you like it.
 
And sorry for being absent on the boards, I will repent my sins.

So very much looking forward to this - If I can't have more Crzyfck Stories, I will happily accept revamps of Crzyfck stories - <G> - Pug

I always very much enjoy your stuff Crazyfck. I also have gone so far to run your Portuguese stories through a translator. I really like "Pandora" even though babelfish does a bad translation. You can see what I have at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Anomalies_in_female_growth/files/Stories/Crazyfck%27s%20Stories/

Take care