Debido-San just answered your question, anything about an already buff chick is pretty much F-M without the G, after all the point of FMG is to demonstrate the woman growing into a beautiful muscular female.

If she is already buff, then it would fall under the muscular females category as it will have nothing to do with the growth aspect whatsover.

I would definitely call myself a writer as well, just not a FMG one, not yet at least, i hope i can become one later on in my life, but iv read alot of stories, and one thing i've learned from looking bak at reading those, is that it definitely turns me off when you have to wait forever for the next segment of the story, but i understand that were lucky enuf the authors are even sharing them with us. But iv found that I PREFER one segment after another, because I hate reading long stories unless there broken up like that, but when a author keeps on givin consistantly, i found tat thats a bonus, eagores SHOE2 was updated almost two times a week, so i found that even though there wer chapters i DIDNT like(o how few those were) I still kept checking my magic crayons every tuesday and saturday, mainly because Eagore never gave me a chance to get bored with the story.

And while were here, I'd like to ask these great authors, how'd you discover your talent. Like strawberry, Iv won contests and prizes for stories, and I am a official poet, have 8 published poems, and have been a part of "twisted rhyme" since i was 14 (plz no1 ask me to write a FMG poem, I've tried but cant seem to bend my imagination and skill into that direction) but anytime I try i cant seem to write good FMG stories, I have so many ideas in my mind that are great, but when writin, suddenly lose about 99% of there quality.

Great comments on story writing!

One comment on having the woman start out muscular already - this can work and still be muscle growth if you incorporate in a flashback about how she grew muscular.  That way you have already established she will be muscular, but also get the growth.  The woman's growth can always continue, also (which can be interesting if people think she is already through growing...)

No one has mentioned it, but you will want to give some thought about the woman’s outlook.  Is she gentle, dominant, etc.  You probably already have ideas, but dominant vs gentle seems to be a major dichotomy in FMG stories.

Things to avoid that come to mind…

1.  Avoid excessive reliance on numbers when describing growth.  It bugs me when I see a story that relies heavily on using numbers exclusively for descriptions (e.g. “her arm used to be only 12 inches, but quickly grew to 14, the, 22 inches!”)  Occasional reference to measurements is OK, but using it exclusively to describe gets monotonous.  Descriptions of comparisons or relative sizes tend to be better, I feel.

2.  Related to numbers again, try to avoid too much description of every pound a woman is able to lift after growing.  Two instances of these that bother me – (1) excessive listing of each lift to woman can make (she should lift 50 lbs an hour ago, then 60 lbs, and now 70 lbs!) , and (2) unrealistic numbers.  Unrealistic numbers are fine if super strength is involved, but if a woman picks up a car, I don’t care how many pounds it weighs…its enough to say she lifted a car!

That’s my rant.  I’ll finish with the two best pieces of advice I ever received on writing:


Write about what you know 

Show, don’t tell 
       (e.g. don’t tell the reader a woman is super strong, or super clever, etc; show it in your writing!)

:nods: Interesting, I never thought of doing that

Actually, this is a BIG question I have. I started writing a story. I am writing it as I usually do, and people tend to respond well to my stories. I just want to ask you all, as men, if hearing what a female character is thinking is interesting or if it’s all “yap yap yap.”


I agree about the numbers thing.

Thank you for the tips, Osquip...if you could answer that question I just had, that would be extra awesome.

Thank you as well, Pimp. If you would also be interesting in answering the question I just posed, it would be most appreciated.