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August 6, 2011 at 7:36 am #102533
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ParticipantI’m going to attempt a real comic. I feel like I’m stabbing in the dark a bit.
http://darkcatharsis.blogspot.com/2011/08/fmg-comicbook-early-stages.html
Sketches of early development. Are they too big not big enough? Is the story idea not up to snuff?
Symbiotes unite with a host and depending on which symbiote an emotional trigger, fear lust, rage ect 8 in total. Takes place in a female dominated universe with parodies of superheroes who will become infected.
The symbols like (o) are the entry point of the symbiote and also tell which type has united with the host.
I apologize if asking for feedback is in bad taste, I’m just trying to get an idea what direction looks good to persons not myself.
August 6, 2011 at 7:50 am #102536TC2
ParticipantThe size seems fine to me, but the story is what’s gonna sell it! I’d have to see it in action before I could contribute any valid opinions.
August 6, 2011 at 8:32 am #102537CK
ParticipantInteresting concept, size wise more than reasonable but again if your going for a real comic plot/story will need to sell it more than just art for sequences.
August 6, 2011 at 8:51 am #102538Ashlee
Participantvery nice work
August 7, 2011 at 1:11 am #102554BadIdeas
ParticipantOkay the plot is at this stage, I dunno.
A meteor crashlands on earth containing the 8 symbiotes. There is a homeworld these things come from. They seek to unite/assimilate the universe by becoming one with the populace. Anyway it lands on Earth f3m, get it? All women, at least mostly. When scientist try to open the meteor all 8 get out.
Megan Frost – Antagonist follows the plan and reproduces her symbiote by infecting others.
Celeste Cole – Protagonist rebels against her symbiote. She has a strong enough will for her mind to remain in tact after the transformation.
Each symbiote triggers the beastly transformation through different emotional responses. The color of the symbiote matches the acquired skin tone. Each one also has a different means of infecting others. Celeste is the only one who can will the change to happen to herself as well as others with her mind. She can also (more heroically) force the symbiote out of another person. However on nights where the moon is in full phase all bets are off. Also if someone with animal dna or characteristics is infected we get a werebeast scenario.
Red – Rage triggered by intense anger
Orange – Fear triggered by fear
Blue – Compassion triggered by the need to help those in danger
Violet – Stress triggered by stress
Pink – Lust triggered by lust
Yellow – Laughter triggered by laughter
Grey – Desperation triggered by feeling powerless
Green – Fortitude triggered at willThe first story arc (comic) covers the arrival of the symbiotes, and Celeste’s first transformation after her college professor turns herself (with symbiote help) into a lizard beast. Her roommate turns out to be a superhero “The Slinger” who helps her fight off some infected heroes as well. As you have guessed, possibly, universe f3m is populated with hero parodies. Can’t use properties I do not own. Any suggestions on the 3 parodies for the chapter 1 brawl?
August 7, 2011 at 1:11 am #102555BadIdeas
ParticipantOkay the plot is at this stage, I dunno.
A meteor crashlands on earth containing the 8 symbiotes. There is a homeworld these things come from. They seek to unite/assimilate the universe by becoming one with the populace. Anyway it lands on Earth f3m, get it? All women, at least mostly. When scientist try to open the meteor all 8 get out.
Megan Frost – Antagonist follows the plan and reproduces her symbiote by infecting others.
Celeste Cole – Protagonist rebels against her symbiote. She has a strong enough will for her mind to remain in tact after the transformation.
Each symbiote triggers the beastly transformation through different emotional responses. The color of the symbiote matches the acquired skin tone. Each one also has a different means of infecting others. Celeste is the only one who can will the change to happen to herself as well as others with her mind. She can also (more heroically) force the symbiote out of another person. However on nights where the moon is in full phase all bets are off. Also if someone with animal dna or characteristics is infected we get a werebeast scenario.
Red – Rage triggered by intense anger
Orange – Fear triggered by fear
Blue – Compassion triggered by the need to help those in danger
Violet – Stress triggered by stress
Pink – Lust triggered by lust
Yellow – Laughter triggered by laughter
Grey – Desperation triggered by feeling powerless
Green – Fortitude triggered at willThe first story arc (comic) covers the arrival of the symbiotes, and Celeste’s first transformation after her college professor turns herself (with symbiote help) into a lizard beast. Her roommate turns out to be a superhero “The Slinger” who helps her fight off some infected heroes as well. As you have guessed, possibly, universe f3m is populated with hero parodies. Can’t use properties I do not own. Any suggestions on the 3 parodies for the chapter 1 brawl?
August 8, 2011 at 9:36 am #102606BadIdeas
ParticipantI added a rather random brainstormy image of a quartet of cheerleaders receiving red symbiotes in mid change. I liked it so much I colored it. Kinda.
http://darkcatharsis.blogspot.com/2011/08/universe-f3m-hulked-up-cheerleaders.html
August 9, 2011 at 1:19 am #102620Ashlee
ParticipantLooks cools , kinda like Satan’s Cheerleaders,great work
You can always do a devil and max Devilian story line
Yes My arrogant pretties, You wanted to be the best, you wanted to be Pretty forever,
You did not read the contract, Its My sense of beauty , Not yours!!!
Now not only do you cheer But you are now MY entire football team !!!BAWWAAHHAHAHAAAugust 9, 2011 at 5:16 am #102621BadIdeas
ParticipantLOL That sounds like a fun idea. Maybe they get tricked into exposing themselves to the things. In other kool beans I added my Hulked Out Heroines from the first issue I’m working on. Check it out if you guys are so inclined. The creative juices are flowing this week so far! đ I may even take a request or three if anyones interested. Flat colors of course. I’m still learning to render color properly.
August 12, 2011 at 1:01 pm #102693BadIdeas
ParticipantAnd now I randomly hulk out heroines.
Fun little side project đ 16 in total on my blog!
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