Webcam Wonder

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  • November 27, 2011 at 8:33 am #104784
    Fonk
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    Hello gang! Long time, no post… sorry about that. Work has been crazed these past three months. Anyway, I had the idea for this one pretty soon after my previous story, but it took a lot longer to work things out this time around.

    As ever, a Miss Morris continuation can’t be too far away! In the meantime, though, please enjoy Webcam Wonder.

    November 28, 2011 at 1:15 am #104796
    Cowprobe
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    This is a wonderfully developed story.

    You don’t demonize the other fetish used in the story while still being able to balance the main character’s discomfort with being the focus of it.

    Also the longer overarching plot of Sam Waters is compelling. I’m wondering where you’ll take it next but that earnest red headed nurse does provide some possibilities.

    Thanks for the hard work.

    You keep writing and I’ll keep reading.

    November 28, 2011 at 2:24 am #104802
    The Highlander
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    Very good story, I always like to hear more of Sam’s adventures. And I agree with Cowprobe, that red-headed nurse sounds like a perfect candidate for enhancement.

    The one small criticism I would add is that like in Flexie and Biceps there’s no indication of what happens to the girl afterwards. I really liked those little paragraphs, they were an excellent way to end the stories.

    December 1, 2011 at 5:34 pm #104837
    Fonk
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    Cowprobe: thank you very much! I now have a definite plan for Sam’s stories – they started out as an excuse for random growth scenes using genre staples, but now I know where he’s heading.

    The Highlander: d’you know, I forgot those ending paragraphs existed until you mentioned them? Sorry! However, with Flexie I wanted the final line to be the revelation that Sam was back. This time I wanted the final line to be something different.

    Maybe certain people’s destinies have changed…

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