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  • August 16, 2005 at 3:26 am #11384
    fasola
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    Here is a piece I just draw. tell me what you guys and gals think.

    please feedback

    August 16, 2005 at 4:59 am #11385
    refaal
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    Hi fasola!
    I really like the shading, very stilish!
    but her hands seems a bit smaller to me… dont you think?
    anyway, great job! keep it comin  😀

    August 16, 2005 at 8:01 am #11386
    ratlaf
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    yes, an a bit of refinment in the face as well… otherwise wonderful muscles…

    August 16, 2005 at 4:32 pm #11387
    X-Greg
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    I recognize more Lenda's body than ger face, but it's a really good job, hope you won't stop there.

    PS: nice avatar ratlaf

    August 16, 2005 at 6:35 pm #11388
    higalack
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    Lol looks like you used the same photo of lenda murray as i did for one of my pics in a previous post. Just that i kinda stole the bod only  😀

    Well from looking at my copy of the pic it seems that you need to extend the mouth abit. the shape of the face needs refinement, just dont add to many more lines since ur using an illustrative style

    Her left arm should be extended a bit to the left a more.

    Here chest is too high it should be lowered near to the bottom of her shoulders

    Also the slope of but should be a bit higher as well.

    Anways keep working on it, was going to do a sketch of lenda murray myself, looks like ya beat me to it

    August 17, 2005 at 3:00 am #11389
    Anonymous
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    I think that's a lovely pic.  I also love the shading and musculature.  I think perhaps the face could do with a little work to improve it as the body seems to have had more time and energy put into it (although there's nothing wrong with that!).  All in all a great piece.  I look forward to seeing more of your art – thanks for sharing it with us!

    August 17, 2005 at 7:40 pm #11390
    10-4
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    It’s nice.

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