Awesome new Story at DtV

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  • March 3, 2006 at 10:25 pm #23622
    ratlaf
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    There's an awesome new story at Diana the Valkyire called Bonnie Biceps, it's good and worth the read!!!

    Here's the link: http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/1misc21/bonnie.txt

    enjoy.  👿

    March 4, 2006 at 12:43 am #23623
    g-man
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    I've been very dissapointed with DtV when it comes to stories of late. They're all the same kind of stories these days. I don't check the update list very often anymore since it is so long (weeks or months) between stories that I like.

    In the good old days there used to be tons of growth stories being posted.

    March 4, 2006 at 12:44 am #23624
    AbyssPlanet
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    I read Bonnie Biceps when it got posted last night. And yes, it was great.

    March 4, 2006 at 7:05 am #23625
    femmusclelovr11
    Participant

    I've been very dissapointed with DtV when it comes to stories of late. They're all the same kind of stories these days. I don't check the update list very often anymore since it is so long (weeks or months) between stories that I like.

    In the good old days there used to be tons of growth stories being posted.

    I totally agree..Im more of a FMG fan than anything..

    March 4, 2006 at 7:53 am #23626
    g-man
    Participant

    Yeah. This story was REALLY good. It isn't FMG, but it was still good. It is just that 99% of stories on DtV now are wrestling and bullbusters.

    March 4, 2006 at 8:34 am #23627
    iceman75
    Participant

    I agree totally with you guys about the story quality, it seems that its every 4 or 5 days that DTV has a good-great story on it, I haven't read Bonnie Biceps all the way through yet, but from what I've seen, it could be very good. I hope this points to a good start of quality stories for the future. Not to mention that it was by Shamus, who was one of my favorite old time writers from a while ago.

    March 4, 2006 at 9:49 am #23628
    Mr.Shhh
    Participant

    Great story!  Can't wait to see where it goes form here.  I agree with what most people have been saying about the type of stories posted on DtV.  Agressive women beating up men or other women is just not my thing.  It seems like domination is the order of the day.  Too bad.

    March 4, 2006 at 1:44 pm #23629
    JimmyDimples
    Participant

    Very little crude language… no violence… no sex… and I was STILL captivated.

    Shamus, wherever you are… ya did good. 😀

    Hope there's sequels.

    March 4, 2006 at 3:37 pm #23630
    AbyssPlanet
    Participant

    I think I liked it because it's my single favorite "fantasy" – the sort of thing that could happen to me, and I desperately wish would happen to me, even if it's unlikely. As much as I love "fantasy" stories like those posted by Mr. Shhh, stories like "Bonnie Biceps" seem to strike a different chord in me, because I find myself saying "Damn, I wish that was me".

    March 5, 2006 at 2:41 am #23631
    AlexG
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    I've been very dissapointed with DtV when it comes to stories of late. They're all the same kind of stories these days. I don't check the update list very often anymore since it is so long (weeks or months) between stories that I like.

    In the good old days there used to be tons of growth stories being posted.

    Well, the exact same could be said about GTS or She-Hulk stories – only so much skillful talent is available (or willing to post their materials) at any given time and only so many ways you can cover the concept/format of FMG before its gets to be a retreaded cliché of itself.

    If you really want originality, then it's time to think outside of the box . . .  😎

    Or as they use to say on Monty Python – And now for something completely different.

    “I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
    ~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

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