Vega and Aoboshi

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  • June 25, 2006 at 11:11 am #33506
    BlackKusanagi
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    These are two new characters for Vixen's story. I love the descrips I did on them, but have mixed feelings on the pics. Ill let yall judge. This was going to go up on Muscular Women (since people look there more than here) but I was like, what the heck.

    Enjoy.

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35301993/

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35302932/

    June 25, 2006 at 11:35 am #33507
    Matthew Lim
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    Looks good BK. IMO I think it does belong in Muscular Women, but I'll leave it up to Masschine.

    June 25, 2006 at 3:59 pm #33508
    AlexG
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    Can't really say that I disagree with KTM, if that's of any assistance.

    BTW – the second one has overtones of a female Thark from ERB's John Carter, Warlord of Mars books.    😎

    “I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
    ~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

    June 25, 2006 at 6:02 pm #33509
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
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    Most excellent illustrations, dear Kusanagi-kun.

    I's am most taken by your technique of depicting your four armed character.
    Shall there be more of her in variant poses?

    Thank you for posting, dear friend.

    Peace
    Neon

    June 25, 2006 at 8:36 pm #33510
    BlackKusanagi
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    Thanks for the comments. To answer your question Black, Ill end up doing so when I start on the comic again… lol.

    June 25, 2006 at 8:37 pm #33511
    ze fly
    Participant

    Really impressive.  😮

    June 25, 2006 at 8:49 pm #33512
    mikazuki
    Participant

    Good job with your character profiles. I look forward to seeing them in action in your manga.

    What is it about the pics that you're not sure about? You can do what I do, and just chuck them in a story, and modify them as their character becomes clearer.

    June 25, 2006 at 11:45 pm #33513
    BlackKusanagi
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    I got the characters down. I just at the moment didnt like how the pics came out, although that changed quickly. Thanks for the support Mika. 😀

    June 26, 2006 at 1:20 am #33514
    JimmyDimples
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    Hmm… at first I thought that the characters would have mixed emotions, but I couldn't tell what they were… I can't see their faces.

    I think that may be one of the problems… I got no idea what their expression is.  From my glance they look, mysterious, sinister, or mean, but not being able to see the mouth probably puts me off.

    Of course, that's just one critic's opinion. 

    June 26, 2006 at 1:30 am #33515
    BlackKusanagi
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    Vega constantly evolves…so maybe a mouth might be added in the future. But Aoboshi…I might use her eyes to show feelings.

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