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May 14, 2005 at 7:41 am #3905MaxParticipant
Hope you enjoy my new story and many thanks to Greinskyn for helping me with it. Please, let me know what do you think.
Max
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A.D. 1 – Disease
By Max
Co-Written and edited by GreinskynHidden in an abandoned warehouse, three bank
robbers were dividing their bounty. They were so
happy counting the stolen cash that they missed the
arrival of yet another."Who's there?" shouted the boss when he finally
heard something approach. The other two thieves
followed his lead. Instantly they stood beside him
with their Uzis level and eyes alert."Only me boys." said a feminine voice from out of
the darkness. Something so sensual and commanding
in her tone caused even these hardened criminals to
relax visibly. Fingers eased off of triggers and
hopeful smiles formed on their faces as thoughts of
another "score" came to mind.Accompanying her approach was an ever increasing
sound of heels clicking on concrete. In the empty
warehouse it seemed all encompassing so when the
woman finally came into view all eyes were on her
black stilettos. They watched as if hypnotized as
her heels sharply impacted the floor creating the
distinctive sound. So enthralled were the men that
it took a few moments to notice anything else.
Once they did, the thieves couldn't take their eyes
off her.The raven haired beauty was dressed in a skimpy
black leather outfit. The letters "AD" were
embossed in bold letters across her chest, one per
generous breast.As she drew closer, the thieves could see that she
was very tall for a woman. Hell she was very tall
even for a man! The leader correctly guessed her
height to be in the neighborhood of 6' 7". Not a
small man himself at 6' 2", he still found himself
looking upward into her eyes at an impossible angle.
'Surely some of that has to be the heels' he
thought, but found it impossible to look away from
her mesmerizing green eyes to check.The other two looked on in awe at the Amazon before
them. There was no other description that fit her.
The defined muscular development spoke of someone
who was a dedicated weight trainer. Despite this
her female curves were quite impressive for a woman
of such a build."Well, what have we got here?" said the leader when
he finally regained his composure. "I didn't know
you bought me a present guys" he laughed while
returning his gaze toward the woman.The other thieves just looked at themselves and
shrugged their shoulders."Won't you like to give your present a kiss?"
smiled the woman innocently.With a grin on his face, the leader approached the
woman. 'Damn she's big!' he thought in wonder as
their close proximity emphasized her height
advantage even more. Unconsciously the man tried
to stand taller but it did little good. Bending
slightly to accommodate, the woman kissed him right
on the lips. It wasn't a short kiss either and
soon they wrapped their arms around each other in a
soft embrace.Everything was going good until the other two
thieves noted that their leader began to move
frantically. They watched astonished as it seemed
he wasn't able to break the embrace of the woman.
Muscles bunched under his tight shirt from the
intense effort he was putting forth. In comparison,
the woman looked totally relaxed, her muscles
weren't even flexing.Then an even more impossible thing started to
happen…The bandits watched as their boss began slowly
shrinking in the arms of the woman. At first it was
hardly noticeable with just a slight loosening of
his clothes. Soon, however his feet were hanging
off the floor and rising. They also watched as the
muscles of their boss were shrinking faster than
the rest of his body. By the time the shoes fell
off his small feet he looked no more than a skinny
boy.Terrified, the two opened fired against the woman.
She turned around letting her back receive the hail
of bullets. They kept firing clip after clip even
as it became obvious the bullets were only
destroying the outfit not damaging the skin of the
woman whatsoever.Finally the guns quit shooting. The smoking
barrels were still leveled at the Amazonian figure
before them but were useless and empty."It can't be!" one finally spoke, breaking the
silence.The woman's muscular back was still turned towards
them. Her tight leather outfit had been shredded
by the bullets and barely held together.
Underneath, the deeply tanned skin showed no effect
from the hundreds of hot lead bullets that had
slammed into it. Not a bruise or cut marred the
flawless flesh. As the two watched, the battered
leather began to tear and pull apart. It didn't
take them long to figure out why.She was growing.
"Ah! I feel much better" said the woman as she
released the limp figure in her arms. Free from
the burden she extended her arms towards the
ceiling and then flexed them. The thieves watched
as big biceps bulged outward. The huge masses of
muscle continued to expand and grow even as she
held the pose.She turned around again letting the thieves once
more see her impressive chest. The move was well
timed because just then her overtaxed top gave way.
Had the two been less terrified they would have
truly been in awe. Standing high and proud her
breasts seemed totally unaffected by gravity even
despite their large size."Now, who wants to be next?" grinned the now almost
7 feet tall Amazon.The men didn't hesitate and tried to fire again
against her. The guns were empty, however and made
no sound other than a couple of impotent clicks."Stop that already. A long time ago I became bullet
proof. There is no way you can harm me. You only
succeeded in destroying my outfit" said the woman.
"Besides if one of you were unlucky enough to hit
one of my nipples or an eye it might sting enough
to piss me off." The powerful figure grew as dark
as her tone. "You wouldn't want to see me angry."In truth the two didn't want to see her at all.
"I better get out of here" yelled one as he dropped
his useless weapon and ran toward the back door."Oh no, you don't" said the woman to the rapidly
retreating man. She waved her hand towards the
still standing thief. The blow was so powerful it
created a gust of wind that sent him sailing. He
flew across the warehouse and struck one of the
walls. 'Good thing I restrained myself!' thought
the woman.After taking care of that thief, the Amazon
concentrated on the running one. She put her lips
together and sucked air into her lungs. The running
thief suddenly found himself being dragged backward
by the drop in air pressure.He still was trying to move forward, but it was
useless. Finally, he lost his balance entirely and
flew backwards toward the woman. She stopped
sucking and extended her hand to catch the thief. A
cracking noise rang out as his head impacted
against her palm.Immediately the thief began to cry in pain.
"I didn't want to hurt you. I'm sorry" apologized
the woman. She knew that the man's skull had
nearly fragmented from the collision with her
feminine hand."I won't let you suffer too much" cooed the woman
as she grabbed the man's head with her fingers. At
the contact she rapidly began to absorb from him
his essence.The man started to get smaller and weaker. His body
seemingly compressed inward as the woman drained
him completely. Her muscles bulged and pulsated
with the added new strength along with a further
increase in height.When she couldn't risk taking anymore from the
thief without killing him, she laid him delicately
on the floor. It was only then, when the sound of a
car's engine starting reached her alert ears.As she turned her head she watched as the last
thief was trying to escape in a car. "Nice try"
smiled the woman.Running at great speed, the raven haired Amazon
dashed through the door and reached the car. Using
just her bare hands she lifted the vehicle in the
air with ease. "Come out and I promise to finish
your suffering quickly" said the woman as she shook
the car from side to side. Her efforts left the
thief little choice as he was quite suddenly thrown
free, landing on the pavement in a heap.Placing the vehicle down again, the woman walked
slowly towards the man. Terror was visible in his
eyes."Get away from me. If you want the money just take
it!! Please don't kill me!" he begged."I won't kill you silly" smiled the woman. "You and
your buddies will go to jail for the crimes you
committed. I'm only assuring that you never use
your muscles for doing bad things again"."There is no disease like the news is reporting,"
said the man, realization dawning in his wide eyes.
"It was you"When she reached down to pick him up her biceps
looked a lot bigger than the last time he'd saw
them."You are correct, but that little bit of knowledge
will do you no good. I call myself the Absolute
Drainer, because that is what I am. I drain the
essence of power from those that are evil. Soon,
this town will be free of scum like you" vowed the
woman triumphantly as she started to absorb yet
again the muscles and height from her victim."No please. Stop" begged the thief as he felt his
strength leaving him."Sorry, but you need to be punished for your crimes.
Your strength will be better used on me" moaned the
woman as her pectoral muscles began pushing her
round breasts ever higher. Her hips and legs turned
also very muscular but her short skirt managed to
handle the expansion.The sight of the woman growing the muscles she was
sucking up from him was the last thing the thief
saw before passing out.Absolutely drained, the thief was left with his
other friends to wait the arrival of the police.***
"… and in the news. Another report about the
strange disease that is affecting our fair city has
just broke. Thieves that robbed the GTS bank this
morning were found in an abandoned warehouse with a
severe case of the mysterious atrophy disease" said
a reporter."Why this disease is affecting only criminals is
unknown," he continued, "but local residents are
more than glad to have this disease on their side.
We bring you now to our testimony from an old woman
that had a thief steal her purse just last night."The screen was suddenly filled with the image of a
tiny old woman. Her testimony had already begun
"Yes. I was walking home when this bad man pulled
my purse out of my hands and ran away. Minutes
later, the police found him and if it wasn't for
the purse he still had in his hands I wouldn't have
recognized him."Another flash and the reporter was back in view.
"And that is not all. Here is another woman that
was sexually assaulted the other night. Fortunately
the violator didn't have the chance to complete his
dirty deed." The camera moved in for a close-up
highlighting the serious set to the reporter's jaw.
"Please can you tell us in your own words what
happened?""I didn't see anything," said the distraught young
woman. "I was just begging this man to let me go,
his knife was on my throat when suddenly I felt
like a slap on my face and I lost consciousness.
When I woke up, lying by my side was the thinnest
man I have ever seen.""You have heard just a few testimonies concerning
the atrophy disease that is hitting our town, but
there is more," said the reporter as the camera
changed angles. "Now, it seems that there is yet
another disease spreading around. Tune in later for
more information on tonight's edition."Doctor Dodson shut off the TV when he heard the
metallic doors of his residence start to open.
Suddenly he heard a shriek as the specially
reinforced steel was yanked out of the doorframe."Oops!! I guess I need to control my level of
strength again" sighed a feminine voice."Will I ever get anything strong enough to stand up
to one of your entrances Alyssa?" joked the doctor.Smiling, the doctor walked toward the gaping hole
that had once been a doorway. There he saw a
towering Amazon at least 8' tall with muscles twice
the size of any living human being wearing an
overstretched gym suit."Sorry doc. I will put the door back in a sec"
smiled Alyssa as she adjusted the door and set it
in as good as new."You know that you don't need to call me "doc". I'm
your husband now" said the doctor."Sorry Leon. It's a hard habit to kill. You have
been my doctor for so long" smiled Alyssa almost
shyly."Yes. I know the feeling." Sighed the good doctor.
I have been treating you for the last 10 years,
since you were only 13 years old. I still can't
believe that you decided to marry me.""Why wouldn't I? You are the most tender man I
have ever met" grinned Alyssa as she hoisted her
husband effortlessly into the air with one of her
strong arms. "Not to mention that you still decided
to be with me, even knowing my secret.""I couldn't avoid falling in love with you. I was
so young myself when you first entered my office
looking for help for your "special" condition. I
remember how shook up you were after your power
first manifested itself" laughed Leon."That isn't funny. I could have killed that boy!"
blushed an embarrassed Alyssa."But you didn't," he consoled her. "… and you
haven't done it so far. You are a good person with
a very special gift."Alyssa reached the living room and placed her
husband gently onto the couch. "So what do you
think? Did I make myself too big this Time?" asked
Alyssa with the most innocent of faces.She knew perfectly well that Leon liked strong
women and there was no woman or man in the world as
strong as her. Alyssa began to flex her arms and
legs displaying her impossibly big muscles bulging
with extreme power."You are so beautiful Alyssa" gasped Leon entranced
by how muscular his wife had become."It's always good that you like me, no matter how
big I get. But you know that I don't like to be
this way too long" Alyssa said as she moved toward
the desk and took out a vial with an oily solution
inside."Will you help me?" she smiled.
"As always my dear. It will be a pleasure" grinned
Leon as he started to oil down Alyssa's body."Special gift eh?" sighed Alyssa. "I wouldn't have
called my power that when it first developed. I was
afraid that if I touched another boy, he would end
up like a toothpick while I looked like a buff
girl"."Fortunately, we found out that your power was
triggered by a fear response. That boy was bullying
you and your body only reacted as a defensive
maneuver" assured Leon."It was great that you helped me to pass through
that phase and showed me how to control my
power… ah!" smiled Alyssa, getting aroused by the
gentle touch of Leon."And don't forget that it was me who created this
formula to compact your muscles!" added Leon
getting aroused himself by the feel of Alyssa's
oiled muscles. Although they were slowly receding
in size, they were gaining in density. "Otherwise
you would look freakishly muscular.""Indeed. Thanks to your formula I still have all
the strength I have taken from other men but it's
just concentrated in a smaller space. It's thanks
to this formula that after draining about 20 men,
my skin turned so dense I became bullet proof" said
Alyssa, still astonished after all this time."But that is not all. If it wasn't for this formula
you would be a Giantess now." Then almost as an
afterthought he added, "How many men did you drain
today?""Three. That means that I have drained 87 men so
far" said Alyssa with a touch of pride."See my point. This formula helps you to retain a
normal size" said Leon as he finished applying all
the formula over Alyssa's body. He watched as his
wife's body continued slowly shrinking. "Well, as
normal as a woman of 6' 3" with the strength of
nearly 100 men could be"."With the additions of those men, I should be
nearer to 6' 4" now" smiled Alyssa. "The only bad
thing is that my curves get compacted too" she
pouted as her once spectacular breasts now looked
considerably smaller. Running her hands along her
frame showed a considerable narrowing of hips as
well. "Your formula works too well"."That only means that we will have to pay a visit
to your favorite filling out corner" smiled Leon."I will like that, but why for? I'm getting very
frustrated about all of this" said Alyssa. "Being a
crime fighter should be a good thing. I do enjoy
the rush of power I feel by absorbing the strength
and size from criminals and I also enjoy the idea
of helping at the community" said Alyssa. "But,
helping others is also destroying our relationship"
sobbed Alyssa. "My body is literally a mortal
weapon." She looked away from her husband's eyes.
"It has been months since we have been…" Alyssa
blushed "… you know…"."In intimacy" sighed Leon completing the phrase.
Alyssa nodded with tears flowing down her face. She
passed her finger delicately over Leon's head,
playing with his curly hair. "Remember two months
ago? I left you with all those nasty bruises and I
had only drained 7 men by then. Man after man
turned my body heavier until you couldn't stand my
weight any longer. When I reached the 16 men mark
my body turned so hard that I almost ripped you off
with my orgasm"Leon shivered at the memory. "Yes, we haven't made
love since then"."Then, we started to love each other with soft
caresses, but every time I drained a criminal my
strength enhanced even more and I have to be
careful not to hurt you unintentionally" said
Alyssa through an even heavier flow of tears.Leon risked injury and hugged his wife. As he did
so he realized she was now an inch taller than him."Don't worry about it baby," he consoled. "Your
dear husband found the solution as always.""Really?" said Alyssa instantly cheered up.
"I'm not a genius for nothing. What you are doing
for society is absolutely great. Not to mention the
fact that I like you being so much stronger. But
indeed, you and I have needs that need, sorry for
the pun, to be satisfied. For that reason, I
started the development of a new formula months ago.
Today, it's finished".Leon took out of his pocket a small vial filled
with a transparent liquid. "This formula will allow
your muscles to relax to a high degree. You still
will have all your strength, but you won't be able
to apply it all. At this concentration it will
reduce your strength considerably" said Leon."How much?" asked Alyssa, her eyes sparkling with
life of their own."I estimate that you will be as strong as two men
only" said her husband."Why not just one?" said Alyssa.
"You know that I like it that you are stronger"
grinned Leon mischievously."You little bandit" smiled Alyssa as she hugged at
her husband."Easy girl. You haven't drunk the formula yet"
croaked Leon, gasping for air."Oops!" said Alyssa. "Hope I didn't break
anything!""Nah. I'm a strong man" said Leon knowing that
although nothing was broken he would certainly wake
up with some bruises in the morning. "Now lift the
couch honey"Alyssa complied and lifted the couch with her
husband on it with but a single hand. "Anything
else darling?" joked Alyssa."Now put me down and drink the entire vial"
instructed Leon.After placing the couch back in place, Alyssa took
the vial and gulped it down in one shot. It didn't
take too long for her to feel it effects. "I feel
dizzy" said Alyssa wistfully."That means that the formula is working perfectly.
Try to lift the couch again" he said, a faint smile
adorning his lips.Alyssa tried again, but this time she found she
couldn't do it. She then tried with both hands and
this time succeeded, but only to lift it a few
inches from the ground. After a short interval
Alyssa dropped the heavy couch back down, actually
panting from the effort."Good darling. Your muscles are completely relaxed.
Now, let's do another test" grinned Leon as he
squeezed Alyssa's breast a bit hard."Ouch!!" yelled Alyssa. Then, her eyes were opened
wide as the realization of Leon's act sunk in on
her. "Do it again!" she urged.Leon smiled as he grabbed the other breast softly
making Alyssa moan in response. "I forgot how good
you can make me feel Leon. My breasts were so dense
that your fingers could hardly dent my skin""Yes dear. Try to hug me again" coaxed Leon.
This time, Alyssa hugged him more softly than the
last."That's OK dear, but to prove the formula you will
need to hug me very tight".Still a bit worried, Alyssa started to apply more
and more strength finding that Leon wasn't
complaining in the least. Soon she was applying all
the strength she could and he was standing it."Oh Leon!! You are a genius!!" said Alyssa as she
picked up her husband. She was still able to lift
him but it was not as easy as it was in the past.
For the first time in a long while she felt his
weight."Thanks darling. Now, what would you think if we
went to bed and tested your body?. The formula will
work for only about 4 hours. Since you are still
heavier you will have to be the one in bed" said
Leon."I won't complain about that as long as I can feel
you inside me again" purred Alyssa. "But first, I
will like to be… you know… more feminine for
you""I understand. I will expect you with a bottle of
champagne in the bed" smiled Leon."Didn't you forget something darling?" smiled
Alyssa."What?" asked Leon.
"I don't think I can run as fast as I need to in
order to avoid detection, and my disguise was
destroyed by the bank robbers. Fortunately I at
least had my gym clothes to cover me""I don't know why you still go to the gym," he
asked. "The machines they have are useless for
you.""True. But still, I like to show off a bit and I
like the expressions of those men when I can equal
their marks. Faking exhausting of course" giggled
Alyssa with a wink."You like that, don't you?" laughed Leon knowing
full well that Alyssa liked to put the bragging men
in their places. "Give me a sec to get the car keys
and we will be on our way"."Don't worry. I brought our transportation" grinned
Alyssa.***
Minutes later, Leon and Alyssa were cruising in the
thief's car down along the shady streets were the
hookers liked to lurk. They tried to not attract
the attention of the residents, but even if they
did, the car didn't belong to them. They were
looking for a sexy woman that was alone."What do you think about those two?" Leon asked
Alyssa who was hidden in the back seat."Trying two at the same time is a bit risky, not to
mention the weight I will gain" said Alyssa noting
that the girls were above the average in curves
department."Don't worry. You are a big girl" said Leon slowing
down. "Besides they are the only ones alone."Leon lowered the window and one of the hookers
approached"Hello baby. Are you looking for some fun?" asked
the prostitute."Actually, I'm interested in a threesome" smiled
Leon.The hooker called to her partner. The other hooker
approached the window too saying "So, do you think
you can handle our combined heat?""Certainly I can" said Alyssa jumping from the back
seat and placing her hands over the faces of the
hookers. "…and your combined beauty and sexiness
too!"Leon watched amazed as the hookers began rapidly
losing all their feminine features while his wife
was augmenting her own. Her hair grew longer and
brighter easily covering her swelling breasts which
were now reaching an incredible size. He could hear
the sound of her stretching shorts as her rear
expanded.Finally, Alyssa removed her hands from the sexless
hookers and they fell to the ground unconscious.
"Good thing that my power causes the people I drain
to forget the last minutes. Otherwise, my existence
will have become public by now" said Alyssa with a
sexier voice."Its just a matter of time before the reporters
link the atrophy disease with the androgynous
disease that is attacking the hookers" said Leon
while driving away."It is funny how those two diseases have the same
initials, AD. That is why I chose those letters to
be my new name. Unfortunately nobody can remember
my ingenious name after they give all of themselves
to me" grinned Alyssa."And don't forget that those initials are linked to
your name now. Alyssa Dodson" smiled Leon."You are such a romantic" she sighed. "Anyway, I
don't think that the people will mind if there is a
relation between the two diseases" purred Alyssa
caressing her large assets. "But one thing is sure
Leon. I really hope you can handle the combined
heat I have inside me. If I remember well, I now
host the heat of 9 women""Lucky me" grinned Leon as he stepped harder down
on the pedal in response. The horny scientist
drove as fast as he could back home before the 4
hours wore off.The End.
May 15, 2005 at 8:48 am #3906pideyParticipantWow, good job, its an intresting story.
May 15, 2005 at 8:51 am #3907MaxParticipantThanks. Glad you like it.
Max
May 15, 2005 at 10:04 am #3908LonebeatleParticipantVery well written Max, as all of your tales I enjoyed this one very much, glad to see you trying another themes in the transforming arena; i’d like to see a ‘prequel’ but that’s just my greedy bug side LOL
Cheers, Lonebeatle.
May 15, 2005 at 1:07 pm #3909MaxParticipantThanks Lonebeatle for your kind comment. I’m glad that you enjoy this little story as much as my others. Soon I will be posting another idea dealing with a MGTS with transfer content as always 😉 Hope you enjoy it too.
Max
May 16, 2005 at 4:09 am #3910X-GregParticipantNot too long, new, and a bite sexy, I would like her to change a second time (bed time for exemple) but it was a very good story,
Thanks for such a good work.
May 16, 2005 at 6:22 am #3911MaxParticipantGlad you enjoy it X-Greg. You just have left me wondering what kind of second change you have in mind? The muscular or the beauty one?
Max
May 16, 2005 at 7:41 am #3912Deadly PixxxieParticipantThat was an extremely unique and interesting story. I highly enjoyed it.
May 16, 2005 at 8:14 am #3913minimanmaxParticipantI liked that story there are too meny stories where women adbuse there powers. I all ways liked the gental ones 😛 good work.
May 16, 2005 at 9:03 am #3914MaxParticipantThanks Deadly Pixxxie and minimanmax for your words. I must say that I like a gentle woman. Even if she is a GTS suffering of FMG and BE, as long as she keeps being gentle, everything is fine. 😉
Max
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