My first original characters

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  • October 27, 2006 at 7:36 pm #42388
    fasola
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    Hi guys &gals, I decided to try my drawing skills, and came out with this two pieces. It would be cool to recieve some feedback, because I'm trying to improve my skills.

    Background for the characters comming soon.

    October 28, 2006 at 4:04 am #42389
    jdm022
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    First of all…great start. 

    Upper body on the first pic is great but…give a little more size to the forearms to match the appropriate size of the biceps.  Hard to make out thigh development…just a little to dark

    Second pic…amazing lower body, waist, forearms and biceps.  I would suggest rounding out the shoulders a little more and raising the breast level so they're not down too close to her waist.

    Hope this helps…great stuff! ;D

    October 29, 2006 at 11:09 pm #42390
    ze fly
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    Really promising! That's a good start, if you improve: all the better ;D

    October 30, 2006 at 8:31 am #42391
    10-4
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    You’re off to a good start. Just keep at it for a while and you should see some modest improvements over time.

    October 30, 2006 at 9:08 am #42392
    00tree
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    That's an exellent start. I noticed you just did the outline of the lips and nose. The lips are good to have an outline for but I almost never have the center line of the mouth as a strait line. I also like to show then as 3-D as poseble with a lot of shading detail. For the nose I try to draw as few lins as i can and try to give it shape with mainly shadowing. As I finish the drawing I inevitably have heavey lines on the nose  :- but it looks ok on the face sometimes. You Already got the coloring down reeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaal well so I can't give any pointers on that. Keep up the great work and thanks for coloring my Samuri Beserker.  ;D It looks cool.

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