Japanese Female Muscle Picture

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  • May 10, 2007 at 2:16 am #51809
    TC2
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    Hey all,

    I finished a Japanese female muscle sketch I would like you all to check out.  If you don't mind, please drop some comments on the pictures as well at the DA page in order to balance out the, negative comments left by the two DA members.  Enjoy the picture!

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54962597/

    May 10, 2007 at 3:05 am #51810
    TC2
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    Okay a little more incentive here, I probably should have fixed the link in the first post.

    Bigger picture at my DA page:

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54962597/

    May 12, 2007 at 10:46 am #51811
    TC2
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    No one digging the Japanese muscle?  Tsk tsk tsk, that's not motivation for more drawing! ;D

    May 12, 2007 at 2:22 pm #51812
    AlexG
    Keymaster

    No one digging the Japanese muscle?  Tsk tsk tsk, that's not motivation for more drawing! ;D

    The same could be said about the posting of stories . . .  😉

    Being a Brenda Raganot and Min Yung Kim fan, I've taken a look and have (making a tic-tac-toe sign in the air) pronounced it massive good, my son.  8)

    “I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
    ~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

    May 12, 2007 at 4:03 pm #51813
    Jack
    Participant

    I love the massive muscles in this and the dynamic pose.  If you were looking for constructive criticism, I think the mouth needs to be a little higher on the face and perhaps the chin could do with a little reworking.  Also, the perspective on the left hand makes the hand look a little too big, but overall this is a great, great pic.  I love the way you've drawn the muscular bundles and abs in particular, which are worthy of Kinsyo or other great Japanese artists.  I also love the pose and the way her clothes are ripping as she's growing – that's particularly cool.

    Thanks for sharing this great pic with us!

    May 12, 2007 at 4:34 pm #51814
    00tree
    Participant

    No one digging the Japanese muscle?  Tsk tsk tsk, that's not motivation for more drawing! ;D

    I know how you feel I usually get less than a %1 responce rate and half of the responces are usually me responding to questions people ask in the thread  🙁

    May 12, 2007 at 7:04 pm #51815
    cpbell0033944
    Participant

    You've been brave in trying a difficult perspective, IMHO.  It has mostly worked, but, as Jack said, some things need a little reworking.  There are one or two photos of Serena Williams taken from a similar perspective that might help:

    http://forums.superiorpics.com/ubbthreads/showflat.php?Cat=0&Board=5&Number=447244&Searchpage=1&Main=446741&Words=+JBiel_Butt_Lover&topic=&Search=true#Post447244

    May 12, 2007 at 7:49 pm #51816
    TC2
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    Thanks a lot guys!  Yeah a lot of people have said the same about the mouth and perspective, so when I start a new sketch which will be VERY soon I will be working on cleaning up the face a little better and adjusting the perspective a bit more.  Though I kind of did want the hand to be intentionally large as it shows that this woman is no shrimp!  Mwa ha ha ha.

    Thanks for the pictures as well, perspective is one of the tricky parts I'm trying to get the hang of, but hopefully a few more sketches will make it happen.  I'll let you guys know when the new pictures get posted, shouldn't be too long a wait but we'll see what happens.

    Thanks again!

    May 13, 2007 at 5:41 pm #51817
    mikazuki
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    That's some hefty compliments by Jack-san there, no wonder you were so happy ;D It's true, you aced the abs, TC2. And superb job with the shading too, I think that's my favourite part.

    May 13, 2007 at 5:43 pm #51818
    mikazuki
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    I know how you feel I usually get less than a %1 responce rate and half of the responces are usually me responding to questions people ask in the thread  🙁

    nuuuuu~~~ Really? Then I should strive to ask you more questions!

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