The Upside-down Paradise

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  • May 28, 2007 at 3:31 am #52789
    crazyfck
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    Hi people, as many other authors, I've created my own FMG universe

    and I'm inviting you all to read it and tell me what you think about it

    Since the files are too big to post in any forum… and I make revisions and illustrations, etc. I've created a google site

    here it is: http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/home

    tell me what I need to change, is not perfect, I'm not shakespeare, I don't even speak english, but I'm learning

    May 28, 2007 at 8:49 pm #52790
    alex
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    OMFG!  I read the first 2 chapters and I can say the stories are AMAZING!!! I love the universe you created and I found the characters so realistic!  Awesome work. Thank you very much for writing it!

    One question:  Is chapter 3 going to come out soon?

    May 29, 2007 at 1:47 am #52791
    crazyfck
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    OMFG!  I read the first 2 chapters and I can say the stories are AMAZING!!! I love the universe you created and I found the characters so realistic!  Awesome work. Thank you very much for writing it!

    One question:  Is chapter 3 going to come out soon?

    very very thanks

    You already read it!? Dude, there are 140 pages in those two chapters, and I posted yesterday. That's a good signal that I made something right 🙂

    I believe that the Bee society (part I) comes first, this sequel is far more simple to craft; Flavor part III is somewhat… complex,   

    but the very beginning of bee society is already posted, it gives some clues of what happened in the flavor part III

    May 29, 2007 at 6:42 pm #52792
    alex
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    I read Bee Society I.  It really does give us some clue about what happened in New Flavor III.  It's pretty grim if you ask me.  Apparently things didn't go very well.  :/

    I'm curious to see what direction you're going with.  This Bee Society sounds a little depressing for men.  After all…nem todo mundo tem vocação para corno!  😛

    I hope we can see more of Brad too.  He's one cool character.  I kind of prefer to read about strong men chars (strong in personality and character) then wimpy ones like Jake.  But I figure there's room for all types of both men and women in this universe. 

    Again, you're doing great work, and I'm really anxious for more!

    Manda brasa!

    May 31, 2007 at 11:33 am #52793
    crazyfck
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    You got the idea, I said it first, it will not be pretty

    At first men loved the idea, the first two chapters is more like a honeymoon, and then a breakdown in the third part. I know that doesn't sound like a fantasy storytelling, but is to where the story arc leads

    And Jake is indeed the only wimp character in the whole story. But he'll not get much spotlight in the rest of the story, I think. Just key moments. 

    The first chapter of bee society… well, I'm talking too much, I think, but it, yes, is to sound grim

    May 31, 2007 at 12:12 pm #52794
    crazyfck
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    And I've made a little update in the bee part I, just because of your curiosity alex, telling where the brad character is

    http://crazyfck.googlepages.com/thebeesociety-parti

    June 3, 2007 at 3:31 pm #52795
    Rudi
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    Oh.. wow.. I just discovered this thread 8 hours ago.. 😛 Now I've read everything on the site.. 🙂
    Amazingly awesome work, can't wait for the next installment.. Also interesting that Nicholas Tesla interview wich inspired you.. 😛

    June 7, 2007 at 4:28 am #52796
    crazyfck
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    Tesla was a hero-scientist, imho
    when I read that interview, I thought 'wow, that's so sci-fi'

    September 17, 2007 at 3:26 am #52797
    Rudi
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    So, how is it going? 😛

    I'm checking your site every third or fourth day, to see if it gets updated.. 🙂
    I've seen you've started a few other prjects, like the youtube page.. I hope you won't forget about this one, since it's a really awesome story. 🙂

    September 17, 2007 at 9:47 am #52798
    cwmoss
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    yea, you have some great stuff crazyfck. I was really into your story and right when Fernanda was comming on real big to Benjamin I went crazy. This is brillant, please continue. The free world is counting on you!@

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