Help Wanted rev.3

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  • July 10, 2007 at 11:58 am #55447
    Cindy Tortio
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    My eyes are tired..photoshop is exhausting! Here is rev.3. My friends name is Joe and this is supposed to be him as a child at the point he fell in love with muscular women. I don't know if the I beam name spelling worked or if the layout is worth a damn and I am too tired to tell. Many upgrades to Shehulk again and of course allot of foreground added. Hopefully color is next…I titled it- Give me an "O". Big thanks to my daughter who actually figured out how to merge 2 pictures. Input greatly desired.

    July 10, 2007 at 1:27 pm #55448
    00tree
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    sweet pic. ats 4 am so im too fried to give any advise sorry

    July 11, 2007 at 1:01 am #55449
    Jedediah
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    Let's see:
    She Hulk looks pretty good- nice arms, chest, crazed expression.
    The boy is all right- i can't tell if he's dropping eggs or what's going on there.
    I didn't see the I-beam lettering until I read your description, so I'd say it is not too clear.
    Lastly, excellent job on the dog!  I like his little roman nose!

    Um, as far as input- with the lettering, probably the more legible the letters the better.  I would suggest something like a font made out of bent girders as opposed to  more realistically mangled girders.

    I admire your sticktoitiveness on this though!  It's leaps and bounds better than your first go at the subject.  I'm interested to see the color version.

    July 11, 2007 at 5:20 pm #55450
    Reason
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    Everything new you've added is just about perfect. Maybe make the pointy bit of the ice cream cone poke out a bit at the bottom of his hand, and I agree that the writing could be a bit more obvious. By the way, have you found someone to color it yet or are you just going to open it up to the forum?

    I don't know if this is changed or I just haven't noticed it, but is her neck a bit too long? Since her arms are raised up, I think her head should be a bit closer to her shoulders.

    The overall muscle shapes are awesome, but there's a few lines that are throwing me a bit. The outside line of her right leg should go higher and block the line coming down between the two gluteus muscles. Also, there seems to be a superfluous muscle above her left knee.

    I will now call on the lovely Lisa to demonstrate…

    [file name=kttwzrJr__la.011b size=62851]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/kttwzrJr__la.011b[/file]

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    July 12, 2007 at 11:14 am #55451
    Cindy Tortio
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    Holy Moly that picture has driven me nuts! (probably all of you also)Its amazing how hard it is to draw something for someone else and be satisfied with it. I have sent it off to a colorist(after a couple more last minute touches) so I don't miss Joey's birthday and if it wasn't for his birthday I would probably be working on rev.7 and a new set of I beams.. Thank god for a deadline.

    I want to thank all of you for all your help with this picture. I really think the drawing came out nice and because of all your help I was capable of producing something above my current ability…honestly. The muscle and position changes were priceless and I hope you all get a chance to say.."I told her to do that,see that leg." ;D I have learned so much on this piece and I really feel indebted to you all. I have to go practice ice-cream cones now,….Mr.Jedediah! :-[

    July 13, 2007 at 6:09 am #55452
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    Another great picture, SinD – I think that would certainly inspire anyone to be a big fan of She-Hulk, the ice cream cone is a nice touch and I think you did a great job with the jade lady herself… I can't wait.

    July 13, 2007 at 8:06 am #55453
    Cindy Tortio
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    Thanks Prophet and I forgot to mention a thank you for the photo post, Reason, I did incorporate changes off it.

    July 13, 2007 at 3:14 pm #55454
    Reason
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    I don't draw too much these days :(, so it was great to have the opportunity to make a small contribution to such a cool picture. Joe will definitely be blown away by it, plus you've got a story to tell him about it evolved.

    July 13, 2007 at 8:54 pm #55455
    Cindy Tortio
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    The color is done and posted under the she-hulk thread. I commissioned Blitz to do the job, please let me know what you think of it.

    July 15, 2007 at 2:30 am #55456
    blah8884
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    I'm not sure if I can help, but I can say that's a really nice picture 🙂

    Btw, didn't you plan to make a fmg story involving one of your characters?  ???

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