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August 24, 2007 at 6:53 am #58699Christopher BrownParticipant
MWC- Veronica’s 10 knockouts
by lilguy brownguy20@yahoo.com
Veronica boxes 10 guys. One after another only knock out wins.Every week at a Gym in closed down a night. 10 fighters show up after hours
that been friend for a while. They drink and talk junk. They plays cards and
thought about their matches. They are all very good fighter. They are all
pretty cocky about it to. Some of it really got to their heads. They call
themselves the "Brawlers". Unknown to them they about to meet someone from
another group. The MWC (Mature woman Conquest). The men are.Rick- He was a young Mexican guy. He was short but very quick with his hands.
He spoke fast and struck quick. He also had a fast mouth. He love to talk junkTony- A heavy tattooed brawler. He was black with a good right hook. He liked
getting into fights and showing off his pecks. He spent sometime in jail. A
fact he liked to remind peopleValid- He was a cold face Russian. He love to drink and smoke. He spoke very
little but he showed he stuff in the ring. He was very old school and sexiest
in his ways.Fat frankly- A big belly man who get investigated because of his size but he
very quick. He was CzechLister- He was black man and feather weight but a long reach. He fancy himself
a ladies manBig Al- Big Al was the biggest and toughest of the group. He stood 6.2 with
big biceps. He use to be a bouncer and love to tossed his weight aroundSmooth Eddy- He was the pretty boy of the group. He was Latino with a killer
body.Baby face- The youngest of the group had a smooth baby face but was a good
fighter. He was around 5.5Hammond- He was an ex navy seal and taught well in combat. He owned the place.
He Irish.Lenny- He was black British man and currently a heavy weight champion.
"Damm good match last night last night Hammond" Hammond
"Thanks man. I celebrated with banging some shaved pussy women. Some tight
little bitches. Came all over them" Lenny said"Did the cum" Big Al said
"Who cares" Lenny laughed "Dumb whores"
"That’s my boy" Lister said
Suddenly the door open. It was a woman
"Sorry this place is private…woe" Hammond said
"Look at that hot pieces of number." Tony said
"Please she old enough to be your mother" Hammond said
"Who cares..hey bitch..why don’t you ride my love machine" Tony laughed along
with the rest of the men"How charming" The woman said
It was Veronica. Even over 50 she looked impressive. She was 6.2 with legs to
die for. Strong and thick and seem to go for miles. Her breast were huge and
stuck up pridly. They were so firm people thought they were fake but they were
real from years of working out. Every part of her body was built for sex and
muscle. Beside her butt and tits not a single bit of fat and even then it was
fat in the right place. He clothes she was wearing made her big biceps hidden.
She wore a leather vest with a pink tank top. She had the leather jacket open
to show her cleavage. The leather paints gripped around her tight butt.Her hair flowed down to her shoulders. It had little gray steak. She was
Mexican with piecing eyes and red lipstick. He nails were done and she had
expensive perfume on. She was a predator and these were her tools of the hunt.
She had a suit case and a duffel bag."Come on baby..let me fuck them cobwebs out that pussy" Eddy said
"Your really think your man enough with that twig you call a dick" She said
"oooooo" baby face smirked.
"Listen bitch better watch your tone. A girl like you can get hurt up in here"
Tony said"Ohh really how about a wager" Veronica said
"What kind" Hammond said
"A fight. Knockout only"
"You vs. one of us" Hammond said
"All of you. One after another. If any of you knock me out. You win" Veronica
saidThe men laughed
"This bitch crazy..hahahahha" Big Al said
They stop when she open the suit case. It was money. It had to be 300,000
dollars in there."If you win you get this to split. If you win you get me for the night to
split" Veronica said"Are you for real" Hammond said
"Yes. Now if I win (pulling out a contract) This place is owned by me. Sign to
make it official. I have portal camera in the duffel bag to prove what
happen..Unless you think all of you can’t beat a little old lady""Find..I will sign it" Hammond said getting a pen
"Way to go" Baby face said.
"Ok. I set up the camera and get dressed in the dressing room. You guys better
be ready" VeronicaLater
The were in the ring waiting of her. Rick was up first and dancing around the
ring"Little lady probably to scared to come out." Rick said
Veronica came out in some tight gym shorts that clung to her shorts. She wore
a bra that were two size to small. They looked at her and were shock. Her
stomach was flat and like steal. She had six packs abs and look of killer
instinct in her eyes. Her giant breast stood out in display. Her arms were
huge and seem bigger them some of them. She jumped in the ring and put her
gloves on. A smiled went across her perfect juicy red lips."Ready boys" Veronica said
Rick came at her with a couple of punches. He was just testing her. She dodge
and move. She wanted to hurt him. She had to. She wanted the rest to come at
them with all they got so they wouldn’t underestimate her. She wanted no
excuses. He went for the left and miss, veronica caught him with a right that
sent him staggering, she move around him connected with a left as he was
falling. She followed it with and uppercut and sent him flying. He was seeing
stars"Oh shit" Frank said
"Come Ricky not going to let a little old woman hurt you. Come on squirt"
Veronica saidRick got up after an 8 count if they were counting. He got up enrage.
"You fucking cunt" He said
"Sticks and stones" Veronica smirked.
He went for the tits and pussy. They all ways go for that Veronica thought. He
dodge it knowing it. She was fast she caught a coupe of punches in his rib
cage. They were like getting hit with sledge hammer. She grabbed him with her
gloves tossing him around. She was manhandle him. He went for a haymaker but
mistimed it. This was when Veronica winded up and slammed a fist hard into the
stomach. It was like a cannon hit him. His body lifted in the air like her
fist went through him. She held him there and planted a kiss so passionate it
made him weak. She could taste the blood from his mouth as her fist tore him
up inside. She slammed another fist in his gut while still in the air. Rick
spit up blood and then two more following. He fail on his knees."uggg" He moan
She spun in the haymaker knocking him out cold. His body hit the canvas making
his head bounce on the floor 2 times. A tooth flew out. Hammond tried to wake
Rick up but couldn’t. He was still breathing though."Next" Veronica smirked "Damm you guys were right..that made me wet"
"Get her Tony"
Tony jumped over the ropes and showed off her tats. He cracked his neck back
and fourth."Your dead meat bitch. Going to slam every hole in you after I’m done"
"Promises Promises? Veronica smirked
Tony was better. He knew how to fight. She avoided his attack. But he was to
aggressive. She let him take his shots blocking them and moving around. She
let him get tired"Stand still bitch"
He was surprise someone her size could move so fast. She made him dizzy with
her legs movement. Veronica caught him with a right hook and then a combo
drawing blood. She slammed a fist into his face breaking his nose."You bitch" He said staggering
Veronica punch him sending him flying into the ring post. He arms hung around
him and she sent a storm of blows to his chest and stomach. She was working
the body. When her fist slammed into a rib cage she heard the wonderful sound
of a snap. Soon tears was running down his face as another rib snap. Hammond
was about to Jump."Try to help him and you forfeit the match. Its in the contract" Veronica said
He stop. She kept the onslaught for 5 minutes.
"Please no more" Tony begged
Veronica smiled and took off her top showing her perfect breast. She held it
to his face."Were these the big juicy tits you were going to fuck Tony" Veronica smiled
"Please…I sorry"
"Beg me to knock you out..or I wont stop"
"Please knock me out"
"Well sure sense you ask so nicely" Veronica said
She gave him and uppercut sending him out cold. She pushed him out of the
ring. Valid jumped in the ring. He spoke"I vill break yo…..uggg"
She caught him with a right hook before he could talk sending him down to the
ground. It shatter his jaw. When he fail on his back his body flipped over on
his stomach. Veronica stood there dripping with sweat. The look off her
topless brought both fear and the biggest erections the men ever have.
Veronica pussy was dripping wet. She truly loved hurting people and the men
were starting to see this. For the first time they saw they might lose. Not
only lose but be put in the hospital. They had to give it there all. That was
she wanted. When a person get broken when they give it there all their truly
broke there. There standing in front of them was power. Valid the most focus
was out cold with Veronica foot on him. She draped him over her shoulder and
push him out of the ring"Next"
Fat Frankie ran in the ring before the bell rang and slammed his full weight
into her knocking the might Amazon back for the first time. He had her in the
ring post and did some quick punches to the ribs and stomach staggering her.
She wasn’t expect the big man to move to much. Frankie felt in the zone and
had her in the bare hug. That was when he saw the element of surprise was
wearing off. She smiled at him. It was a smile that made his knees shake. He
should off been crashing her ribs right now. She broke the hold. And slammed
in the gut. All his flesh jiggled as the force of the punch seem to get
through the fat. She moved around him focusing on the stomach and ribs."That actually stung a bit bitch" Veronica said giving her famous hammer
punches down on his faceHe couldn’t tag her
"Come on act like I’m a giant Twinkie fat boy maybe you catch me" She said
"Shut up"
"Young men so out of shape now a days..shamefull. You know I fought with the
greatest. Ali, Rocky, taught them, made all those bitches cry even when I’m a
little girl. Lot of experiences behind these "That was when Frank punch her pussy sending her back
"Only rule you put was no helping each other never officially started any
other rules"The men cheered. He started sending a couple of punches her way stagger her.
She dropped to her knees. Frankie smiled knowing he had her know. He
outsmarted her. He went for a uppercut but then she grabbed him and with great
force lifted him in the air"I did do that didn’t I. Shouldn’t off made that contract clearer..well no
rules mean no rules" Veronica smiled.She body slammed him. The ring shook. She lifted up his head by his hair. He
was daze. She waved bye bye before slamming a boxing glove on him. There were
darkness. It took 4 men to drag him out. She stood in the by the ring post
waiting.Lister walked in the ring shaking
"Come on pretty boy..come and get me"
Lister was struck with fear
"Come on you can even take off your gloves"
Lister was still hesitant. That was when she took off her short revealing no
panties and a dripping wet pussy. He could smell it from here. It was nicely
shaven and perfect. It look juicy with a slit hanging down. She was really
dripping.The feather Wight took off his gloves and came at her with anger. He wasn’t
use to women treating him like this. They all ways begged for him. He slammed
a couple of punches in her stomach. 8 to be exact. She didn’t even move. His
fist hurt and he looked up on her. A big smiled went across her lips that made
him go white."Real shame I got to mess up that face." She said
She slammed a fist in his stomach that was like getting hit by a train. The
fist that came at him move so fast he couldn’t even them. A fist slammed into
his ribs snapping 4 of them and two to the sides of his face leaving giant
bruises. He wanted to fall down but punches from all side kept him from
hitting the ground. He was being pushing around like a cat playing with a
mouse. His knees wobbled as punched tore into his face. She knew the camera
was on him so she made sure it got a good view of her naked body. She held him
up by his head and pose with him."Is this the best you guys got" Veronica laugh
She wounded up and slammed him with a vicious uppercut. The force was so great
he flew over the rope knocked out.Lenny ran to him
"You almost killed him" Lenny said
"I know my strength. If I wanted him dead. He would be. Not like you could do
anything about it. When this done he going to be my cross dressing
bitch..going to pimp his young ass out and make a pretty penny. First got to
break and cripple your friends..you will be last Lenny. You..I am going to end
you career. Just want you to know what your fight for" Veronica smirkedAugust 24, 2007 at 7:10 am #58700Christopher BrownParticipantMWC- Veronica 10 knockouts part 2
by lilguy brownguy20@yahoo.com
Veronica take on 10 guys one at a time. Only knock out win.Veronica stood in the ring like a tigress. She was dripping with sweat and
blood. None of the blood her own. It made her breast and he whole body
glisten. Her pussy dripped and dripped with lust of the violence. She took a
water bottle and washed the blood off her gigantic breast. Years of training
made her body pure perfection.5 men laid knocked out. Their bones broken. Their bodies batter. None of
thought this mature woman could crush them so easily. One by one they fail.
They were 5 more remaining. She flex her muscles knowing the fear in their
eyes and moved her hair through her flowing graying hair."Come and get it boys…this is all yours" She said
She looked beautiful and she knew it. It was just bait for the trap. The
remaining men stood outside the ring. The big brute was coming out soon. His
name was Big Al. Hammond was coaching him"Focus..watch her arms ok. There very deadly" Hammond said
"Find I know."
"She got to be tired by now ware her down" Hammond said
Big Al entered the ring and started circling her avoiding her shots. He wasn’t
coming at her strong let."Come not so cocky now are you. Big AL hu? Big faggot is more like it. To
scared to fight a girl" She said"Don’t let he get to you" Hammond said
"Come on bitch" Veronica said parting her legs "Come fuck this sweet pink
pussy so me who boss. Use that big cock. Bet your not man enough to do that.
You know your friend cried like little bitches when I beat them""You fucking bitch" Al said
She laughed standing still. This was when he moved in and caught her with a
left grazing her as she went to duck. He caught her in the ribs a couple of
time as she blocked most of it."Ain’t so cock now bitch going to fucking kill you" Al said
She smiled
"That smarted a bit but it got you close enough for my fist to reach" She said
and caught him with a right. "You had you shots my turn honey"She move around him making him miss every shot. She caught him with ribs the
sides, and stomach shots. She wearing him down and making him stagger. She
ducked down and did and uppercut to her ribs shattering one. Even though she
took some shots it only seem to feel her with aderailing. The battle was
getting good. She loved getting their hopes up and crushing him. She shatter a
second rib and then slammed a fist into his shoulder breaking it. A roadhouse
shattered his jaw and second closed his eye up. He felt like his liver bustBig Al dropped to his knees. Tears ran down his eyes. He knew he had no
change. Veronica bent over with her ass in her face and her pussy dripping..
He got the view of the tightest ass he ever seen. It looked perfect sculpted.
She spread her butt hole because she figured he was an ass man. Veronica was
just oozing sex now."To bad you could have had this AL if you were a little bit more of a man"
Veronica said.She spun around and knocked him out.
"Get this bitch out the ring" She said
Smooth Eddy tried to run but the remaining guys pushed him in.
"Now listen sweet heart we can’t talk about this" Eddy said
"Well I would hate to ruin that face" Veronica said in a girl voice "Maybe I
can avoid that""See you’re a reasonable person"
She ran at him like a speeding car and planted a fist deep into his gut.
"Just work on the body" She said
She slammed a fist on his spine nearly shattering it. He stagger up not
thinking and she caught him in the gun. He felt like his inside exploded.
Veronica lifted his chin up"If I want to I could shatter you spine and make you crippled. Play ball and I
make this quick" Veronica said"Anything..I will do anything" Eddy said
She loved breaking the ounce smug ladies man down.
"Eat my ass out. In front of your bitch friends"
He cried
"Yes Veronica" He said
"Don’t try anything slut or your dead"
He was force to the degrading deed of licking her ass. She stuff her smelly
ass cheeks in his face trapping his nose and mouth. Her powerful as sucked his
face in. Eddy cried a bit as he was force to look ever dirty spot of Veronica.
Veronica moan as she stood in front of the 3 men."How does it feel that all you live for going to be lost on a stupid bet
Hammond" She said flexing "How does it feel to know you all fought your best
but fail so easy"She flex her muscles back and fourth and made them bounch
"It not over let" Hammond said
"Like what you see little boy" Veronica said facing baby face. Eddy was still
eating her on. She rubbed her sticky finger in her clit and started finger
fucking your self "Going to break you in half little boy..going to make you
cry"The men could do nothing without breaking the contract. They were force to
watch Eddy please her. Baby face was shock to find herself harden as he saw
Veronica in all her strength. The Amazon orgasm cumming on her finger. She
clench her ass trapping Eddy’s tongue. Eddy tried to get ou banging on her
back. She just laughed and started licking finger clean in front of baby face.His nose was crush. She unclench her ass and made eddy drop.
"Get up"
Eddy got up
"Please..I"
She went for a fake punch making him flinch. She saw Eddy pissed himself and
Veronica laughed. She slammed her fist into her head. His brain shook in his
head as his eyes went glazy. He fail side ways hitting the ground. Salvia
dripped out of his mouth. Veronica pushed him out of the ringBaby face came in the ring and desperately went for a swing to his back. He
bang and punch on her."Thanks for the massage sweetie" Veronica said and back handed him
She smother him in a boxing hold till he nearly passed out. She pulled his
face out and stuffed him working the body with punch. She left big giant
bruise on his chest."Isn’t that cute baby think he can fight mama" Veronica laughed
Crack
"Ahhh baby rib crack, Ahhh poor baby there goes another rib" She laughed
She pushed him and uppercut him into the ring post. She attacked with a punch
to the gun sending the man’s back into the post so hard it cracked. She
whisper in his ear"You I’m going to keep" She said
She followed it with a storms of blows all over his body and finish it off
with an uppercut. The boy was a bloody mess. His eyes was close up and lip was
broke. She made sure not to in irreversible face damage. She wanted to keep
him. She carried him over her shoulder and push him out of the ring knocked
out."Me and you Hammond" Veronica smiled
Hammond circles around her trying to keep distance but she had a long reach.
Her legs were long and she was on him with punches staggering him. She drew
first blood with a hit to the jaw. She miss one and was caught with a couple
of ribs blows and uppercut. He moved around trying desperately to keep some
distanceShe smiled as she saw blood on her mouth. It was her own.
"Pretty nice Hammond" She said
She spun around as he tried to punch her. She caught him with a jab to the
ribs cracking half his rib cage. Hammond screamed as punch went down on his
face. A flurry of punches hit his body staggering him but he didn’t fall. His
legs were weak. He was staying a float on pull will power."Look like he got some fight in him" Veronica said
She caught him a tornado hook sending him down. Hammond staggered up
"Damm you" Hammond said
She upcut him. His body flew tied to the ropes. A wicked smile cross his face.
His arms were trap in the ropes"No rules right Hammond. Remember that was your idea" She said
His eyes went to fear as she knew what she was going to do. It was nothing he
could do about it. It was like she was moving into a slow motion. She slammed
a fist into his nuts."ahhhhhhhhh" He screamed
It was like his balls was hit with a sledge hammer. Another slammed into his
balls till another till he was just a mess. Veronica ripped his pants off and
continued the onslaught for 10 minutes. She smiled back at Lenny. Hammond was
in tears."Sorry no more babies hammons for you" She said
She slammed a fist into his face knocking him. Veronica stood face to face
with the champ. Lenny.Lenny snuck her before she could turn around and staggered her. He send jabs
to her ribs and guts. He wore nor gloves and was fighting for his life. He was
a champ and he wasn’t going to make any stupid mistakes. She caught him in the
jaw knocking her down."That’s RIGHT" he said " Your good but I’m better"
Suddenly he was shocked when she sprang right up. He went for a punch but she
blocked it and sent a lift to the chin knocking him back. She had a reach but
he block a shot. Even that hurt her hand. She laughed."Can’t believe it" She said
"Believe what"
"Your really thought I was giving it by all back there" She said
He went for a right hook but she dodge it ducking her body down like a limbo
artist. She pushed him with a fist. His arms staggered catching himself off
balance. This left him open for an upper cut that drew blood and push him in
the ropes. When he was push back a fist slammed into his gut and then two into
his chest. He felt his heart shake in his body by the force. She was behind
him before he could react. God she was fast.A right hook caught him in his face knocking him down. He staggered up
bleeding. He caught her with a left but she got her right up before he could
catch her again. One slammed into his ribs cage doing those hammer punches of
hers. He was caught in the ropes getting punch after punch. He fail down to
stop it.She move back circling. He knew some ribs were broken as he got up. She smiled
wicked. This sexy predator smiled. Then he did something that frighten him.
She took his gloves off."You got you gloves off..I got mind..fair is fair"
He didn’t even want to imagine what those fist could do without gloves. He
went to run to the ring but she blocked him with punches to the gut. His whole
body shook as her bare fist slammed into his body. 4 more hits his ribs and
rabid concession tearing through his bones like foil. He was slammed into the
ring post. A might combo of shots hit him hard and amazing speed. He was
blinded by his own tears from without knowing he was crying like a baby. She
started slapping him with her tits for extra embarrassment. He passed out from
pain. She shook him awake"Passing out is not a KO faggot." She said with rage
The punches continued
"You like that you little pussy hu..you like that. Stop your crying and
fucking take it" She saidShe punch him so hard the ring post ripped out of side. She grabbed before he
could fall out of the ring and punch him in the gut and then his ass as he
staggered. He fail. She grabbed him up"Didn’t even punch you in the face let" She said
He saw those dangerous fist and cried. It was no reasoning her now. He saw it
coming and then he black out. All he could feel was pain. He lost count on how
many times she hit him before he was knocked out. She took the belt and spit
on him"Sweet dreams slut"
Month later
He awoke from a coma. Lenny saw a newspaper waiting for him. It said
"Veronica’s new Gym big success
Specialize in empowering women"
Under the paper was a photo album
"I got copies at home. Thought you like to keep this. I am coming for you next
sweetie. Don’t dare try to run away. Love Veronica"There were picture of the men new roles. Picture of them being dominated and
abuse be women. Sold. Listen true to Veronica role was dress as a woman with
implants and force to do degrading feminists acts. Hammond was being walked
around like a dog. There was a picture of Veronica slamming him with a strap
on while she wink at the camera. Lenny closed the book. His body was broken.
All he could do was just wait for her. His new mistress.The end
August 24, 2007 at 7:41 am #58701stmercy2020ParticipantI'll admit this is not my favorite kind of story- I tend to like my amaz0ns a bit less sociopathic. You might want to put an NSFW label on this, too.
Given both of those statements, I have to say that you write quite well in your chosen genre. One thing you need to watch out for, though, is a tendency to switch and flip pronouns. He, him, his refer only to males. She, her, hers refer only to females. Plurals in English are nongendered, and objects are it and its. Fix those details and your writing will be much more readable.
August 24, 2007 at 8:40 am #58702Christopher BrownParticipantjust note not all my ladies are sadistic. got a lot of gentle and protective ones
just like to mix it up
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