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  • August 29, 2007 at 11:59 am #58898
    The Muffin man
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    I was looking for a certain type of story. Not one in particular, just a certain TYPE.

    One where a very muscular girl(height itself is rather unimportant, but short is actually better for me :D) displays feats of incredible strength accidentally. I.e she doesn't INTEND to rip a door of it's hinges, she just grows muscles, and while trying to open the door, rips it to pieces. Incidental displays of strength. Especially if she's trying to control herself(maybe she goes to take a shower and ends up crushing the knobs down to little nubs?)

    Thanks if anyone can find or has written(or will write) any of these types of stories.

    August 29, 2007 at 12:49 pm #58899
    stmercy2020
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    Well, most of the Sylph stories feature some accidental strength stuff- not all, mind you, but most.  They're pretty much all hidden over in the Strength and muscle stories.

    currently 10 'chapters:'
    Ch 1 "Morning Routine": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5548.0/
    Ch 2 "Moving Day": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5573.0/
    Ch 3 "Meet and Greet": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5586.0/
    Ch 4 "Slumber Party": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5641.0/
    Ch 4.5 “I Am Not Clumsy!” by Ad_Meyer: http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5806.0/
      And this pic by Cowprobe goes with it: http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/2117/slyphrl4.gif
    Ch 5 "Student Orientation": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5678.0/
    Ch 6 "Assisted Compositions": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5689.0/
    Ch 7 "All-Nighter": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5711.0/
    Ch 8 "Rat Race": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5753.0/
    Ch 9 “Strong Drinks”: http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5796.0/
    Ch 10: "Brand New Day": http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5890.0/
      And this drawing by Satsurou: http://amaz0ns.com/option,com_smf/Itemid,135/topic,5843.0/

    The best chapters for 'accidental' strength feats are probably 2 and 4, although 3, 7, and 8 are also pretty good.  There's a bit of clothes rippage, as well, in several of the chapters, but it's not really the focus of the stories.  Hope you enjoy these.

    August 30, 2007 at 12:18 am #58900
    The Muffin man
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    😉 An opportunity to shill out your stories? Heh, I'd be a bit annoyed if they weren't awesome 😀 😛

    August 30, 2007 at 3:14 am #58901
    stmercy2020
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    😉 An opportunity to shill out your stories? Heh, I'd be a bit annoyed if they weren't awesome 😀 😛

    Well, thanks for that. ;D

    Honestly, though, I just don't remember that many superstrength stories that fit your criteria.  I think Paul Smith ran a contest over on his eXtreme Strength website that involved supergirls growing uncontrollably strong, but that was quite a while ago, and I can't remember precisely when.  If I happen to wake up sometime today, I'll go scan through them and see if I can locate them.

    August 30, 2007 at 4:59 am #58902
    demented20
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    There is absolutely nothing wrong with shameless self promotion 😉 Who doesn't love the guy walking on the sidewalk like he's minding his own business, but he's wearing a huge sign draped over his shoulders that says something like "EAT AT JOE's! AND I'm JOE"

    I tried to think of some stories that I've read to help you out though, but I can't come up with any thing different that fits your criteria. I sort of remember a yahoo group that had some stories like that, but I think the group is gone. Maybe somebody kept those stories or something.

    August 30, 2007 at 5:46 am #58903
    stmercy2020
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    Found it!

    If you go here, http://hilda.thevalkyrie.com/~xtreme/new_jul05.htm, you should find three stories in the contest section that involve uncontrollable superstrength.

    There're also a couple of so-called 'unfinished' paul smith stories:
    http://hilda.thevalkyrie.com/~xtreme/stories/unrlsd/eruption.txt
    http://hilda.thevalkyrie.com/~xtreme/stories/unrlsd/short10.htm

    Hope you can enjoy these…

    September 1, 2007 at 11:25 am #58904
    The Muffin man
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    My problem with the XTreme strength sites is that it tends to be basically just porn stars badly superimposed onto a car accident with some stupid caption.
    Like "CANDYS MIGHTY MUSCLES LIQUEFIED THE CAR LIKE JELLY" when the car is barely crushed, let alone "liquefied".

    And they tend to be bad writers who insist that swearing is a good replacement for emotion.
    So instead of "Her body was in a fit of pleasure and pain as her muscles swelled, a burning sensation growing deep within." We get "her cunt was so fucking hot cuz she was gonna cum all over this bitch." or something.

    😛 Picky? Pfft. Never.

    September 1, 2007 at 11:42 am #58905
    stmercy2020
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    Heh.  Unfortunately for you, then, I think you may be S.O.L.  To be fair, my knowledge of the genre is hardly encylopedic or exhaustive, but what you are looking for is pretty extremely in the niche category.

    I would recommend looking over Sean Porter's contribution before discounting all the eXtreme pages as badly written porn.  While I won't claim that it isn't porn, it is, at least, not badly written.  You may, however, need to convince an author to write something a bit closer to what you're wanting to read- or else write it yourself (in which case, I'll cheerfully read it…;))

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