Muscle Videl – from Dragon Ball Z

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  • May 29, 2008 at 5:56 pm #71045
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    Hello there!

    So 30K arrived. Yeah I know, it's not a big number but it continously reminds me that we are going somewhere:)

    So I did finish this a week ago, but I had to wait 'til the number hits.

    Anyway I hope I won't disappoint the Videl, DB and/or muscle girl fans out here.

    Keep in mind that I'm still learning (well RElearning, because I was a pretty good drawer a long time ago, but the seven year hiatus is something to count with…) this drawing thing.

    Please post comments – tell me what you are thinking

    May 29, 2008 at 11:22 pm #71046
    Number6
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    Well, I know nothing about the character or what she's supposed to look like normally…that said, the only thing that strikes me is that her arms (in particular, her forearms) look a bit short to me.

    Good work, though…hope to see you continue!

    May 30, 2008 at 8:55 am #71047
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    300+ views… 1 comment…

    maybe you're right.

    but I won't fix it now… 🙂

    May 30, 2008 at 3:20 pm #71048
    gettar82
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    it's fine 🙂

    maybe the forearma muscle are wrong

    May 30, 2008 at 3:25 pm #71049
    cpbell0033944
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    Perhaps a touch of extra length on the upper and lower arms might be nice, but I don't see much wrong with it.  It's really good. 🙂 😉

    May 30, 2008 at 4:02 pm #71050
    fasola
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    well, here is my take. Solarian, it's a very good drawing. You managed to get a nice, powerfull and meancing stance and look. She does look like Gohan might have a hard time.
    What the guys said about the arms, might be right, but I thing that the arms length (and I mean from shoulder to hand) is Ok, what I think is, that the forearm is to short and the arm a little long, but the over all length is ok. Also, she has too many abs. I know there are 4 pairs of muscles, but the fouth ones, are below the waist.
    So it only needs a litle retouching to look awesome.
    Keep it up, the picture shows that you relly know how to draw, just  keep oiling-up the gears.

     

    May 30, 2008 at 4:22 pm #71051
    00tree
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    I was never that big of a dragon ball z fan. I always got bored with all the trash talking
    that made each fight take three episodes. That and I was pissed when they killed android 18.  >:(

    I do like the pic though. I have a soft spot for muscle bound girls with a tom boyish look.  ;D

    May 31, 2008 at 1:04 pm #71052
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    I was thinking. I measured the lenght of her forearm and it's fine. It's jut too broad.

    Fasola, I don't agree with you about the abs. Some people have six pack, eight pack, and I have seen a tenner somewhere…

    But I will do corrections soon…

    May 31, 2008 at 5:44 pm #71053
    cpbell0033944
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    I think each row of abs needs to be slightly taller, therefore pushing the lower set down slightly.  It's a minor issue, though.

    May 31, 2008 at 7:01 pm #71054
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    I updated the picture.

    Nothing serious, but maybe it's better now…

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