The Guitar Hero Complex (part one)

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  • September 25, 2008 at 1:58 am #76443
    unknown
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    I've decided to write about an interesting new way to grow. Sorry that its short so far, but if I try to post it in big chunks I get excited and try to write more and wing it due to wanting to get out to the public. I'm also sorry that I cut it off right before a good part.

    All that aside, here it is so far.

    http://brawna.org/stories/the-guitar-hero-complex

    (Feedback and suggestions are greatly appreciated, even nice criticism.)

    September 25, 2008 at 6:45 am #76444
    SammiChung
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    Am interesting start…as a writer I must suggest that when you write dialogue…seperate it on individual lines…that way its easier to foloow other then that…sounds promising.

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