Black Lioness

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  • November 18, 2008 at 1:03 pm #77905
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    Hardbodies' request in my previous chainsketch…

    I like this except her hair.

    Please post comments, tell me what you think…

    November 18, 2008 at 7:51 pm #77906
    10-4
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    Looks pretty good.

    November 18, 2008 at 11:24 pm #77907
    fasola
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    Great work Solarian. The only comment I would have is that her lats are too low. they seem to come from her butt.
    I think that's all that I can thibnk of.

    November 19, 2008 at 5:04 pm #77908
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    You do have a point.

    November 19, 2008 at 9:25 pm #77909
    Jedediah
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    I was going to post about the odd lats on her too- but Fasola has covered it-

    Regarding drawing hair, I can only recommend that you draw the whole mass of hair as a big shape, then you can apply lines of hair on that as texture.  Trying to draw each bit of hair leads to a confused tangle of lines.

    That aside, I like the arms and legs on this piece- good powerful looking muscles without being huge.  Also good job on the proportion on this piece- it looks much more accurate than your last Ms Marvel picture!

    November 20, 2008 at 3:36 am #77910
    Tonus
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    The arm confused me a bit, perhaps because the elbow is hidden.  That's a minor quibble and other than that I think it looks good, including the hair.  But it never hurts to find out from other artists how they draw hair.  I usually rough in the general outline, then add a few details.  Many other artists seem to layer the hair in, or draw it in large 'strips' to build it up.  What you did in that drawing doesn't look bad, and fits in nicely with the style that you're using.

    November 20, 2008 at 8:21 pm #77911
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    Edited:)

    November 21, 2008 at 4:13 pm #77912
    gettar82
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    ROAR! 😀

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