[temugen]

Wow, I’m totally hooked. I was a huge fan of DBZ when I was younger, and this has just brought all of that rushing back. What’s better is that you’re story moves along at a much nicer pace than most of the DBZ arcs, for which I am most grateful. You should consider entering this as a fanfic to some of the DBZ sites out there as well – it really is very well written and draws you inexorably in as you read. Bravo. 8)