September 29, 2004 at 5:25 pm
#1674
JimmyDimplesParticipant
Not too shabby. You’ve know your way around the writing block, and I like your style. Just a few questions, though…
In Genesis 3:23-24, it was said that man and woman were driven out due to their sin. And in Romans 3:23, it says that EVERYBODY has sinned and fallen short of the glory of God. That would be enough to keep everyone out. Why would Evelyn be given a pass, and not the guides that went with her?
Also, back in the Genesis verses, there were cherubims and a flaming sword blocking the Garden of Eden every which way. Why didn’t Evelyn run into them?
Don’t get me wrong, I like your writing. Just would like a few explanations, though, in the next chapter. 🙂