August 10, 2004 at 6:09 am
#491
Participant
Wow! Very nice! This is a very long, detailed story, with a good sense of realism despite the surreal nature of the situation. I’m sensing (and hoping) that in the next chapter, there will be lots more action. I’m also sensing that Kate is in danger of being corrupted by her powers. But even if that happens, I’m sure her good character will prevail.
Please continue with it!