August 8, 2004 at 12:11 am
#434
Cowprobe
Participant
Man no Johnny Depp piratical action to save these poor saps from the Aztec’s curse!
I like this second chapter especially how it gives a glimmer into how we as humans are set up as pleasure machines. Making love brings us pleasure so as to make more humans. Eating gives us pleasure in order to keep us from starving before passing on our genes. Now you’ve gone and done it though… the primal okey-dokey physiochemical payback is wired for ladies to -in the voice of Hans and Frans- PUMP UP!
The motivations for these ladies are nice as well. Thanks for the effort you putin and the sharing of your writing, 🙂