[Cowprobe]

JimmyDimples,

The depth you’ve given this story makes it very entertaining.

The B.G.S.S.T.R (Big Sister) organisation’s logo is amusingly oedipal. 😈

The Golden Apple along with Atlanta sticks some nice mythology references in there.

You’ve got an eighties gameshow of death vibe with Russian Roulette that can’t be beat. A very cool buildup of a broken world just to give us a hint of what bizarre social rituals grew in the corners of the fridge when Big Sis wasn’t looking. 😈

You keep this up and there will be "Free Monty Banks" t-shirts at the next Arnold Classic 😉

Thank you for sharing and I can’t wait to see the next chapter.