Power Play, chapter 5


Hi there Jimmy

Sorry for the lateness, but again great work on this story. It is so interesting in itself that even without the fmg element, I still find it interesting to read on its own. I like the main character because of is wits and is completely fleshed out, which is not seen everywhere in this kind of fiction. Plus the global scope of the story is always great to follow.

Now at the risk of sounding annoying…WHEN can we expect part 6! We are dying here! Looking forward to seeing the next part of the show. Those commercial breaks are a killer 😆

Thumbs up and keep up the good work!