Power Play, chapter 7



First and foremost, I’d like to thank all of you for your comments, suggestions, and praise. You wouldn’t know how good it feels to have impressed a forum first crack out of the box.

I’m especially pleased that Marknew felt that my sequel did his work justice. And I’m thrilled that it actually got Cowprobe’s head wheels a-turnin’.

Buuuuut… may I tell you guys something else, too?

*Martissa brings in a big soap box, hefts Jimmy on*

You might have noticed that there’s a denoted lack of cursing, graphic violence, nudity or its… erm… affiliated activities.

If this thing ever did become a film, I reckon it’d score a PG-13 rating from the MPAA, and only Vicki’s flip-off moment in Chapter 5 would have to be edited out to make it ready for network prime time.

And that’s one thing I aim to do in my writing. I hope to write so that I don’t have to worry about my kids (if I ever am lucky enough to have ’em) stumbling onto it.

While I appreciate the powerful full figured female as much as the next fellow, I think the writer shortchanges his talent and his readers if he simply settles for something that makes the hormones fizz. There are all sorts of directions one can take a writing piece if he thinks of where it can go from here. It’s a little extra work, but well worth it.

And I am most thrilled that while this is a forum where the woman gets the strength, size, and power, a guy can still leave his mark here if he simply stands his ground and doesn’t compromise.

And I think the compliment I like best in all 7 chapters here came from "Great Honking Fleejeebers!" saotomeproject:

"It’s an FMG story with enough plotline and characterization that you could even consider mailing it to a non-FMG-fetishist member of the female half of the species!"

Now of THAT, I’m proud. 8)

Thanks deeply. Everybody. Now if you’ll excuse me, I gotta put Biotopia in the works.

*Martissa helps Jimmy down, they go off to the study*