70000k Hits – PowerGirl

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  • November 10, 2008 at 6:55 pm #77747
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    Hi there!

    Just want you to know that I uploaded (finally) my 70k kiriban. (is this the right word?)

    Please post comments, tell me what you think.

    November 10, 2008 at 9:55 pm #77748
    Jedediah
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    Hey, man-

    I like the pose and the action of the picture. 

    There are some anatomical things bugging me- overly small hands and feet- and one of her arms- her right one- looks kind of long or attached to her shoulder strangely. 

    All of these are overshadowed by the head and face though- her photographic face clashes with the cartooniness of the rest of the drawing.  It sits oddly in the middle of her shoulders, like she has no neck or is hunching up.

    Maybe there is some way you could use this effect and translate it more into your drawing style?  Maybe trace over the photographic face, to make it more of a lineart?

    That being said, I like your color and texture work here- in particular the work you have done on shading her striated pecs is nice.

    November 11, 2008 at 4:46 am #77749
    gettar82
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    congratulations, my friend 😀

    November 12, 2008 at 4:36 pm #77750
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    – overly small hands and feet- and one of her arms- her right one- looks kind of long or attached to her shoulder strangely

    All of these are overshadowed by the head and face though- her photographic face clashes with the cartooniness of the rest of the drawing.  It sits oddly in the middle of her shoulders, like she has no neck or is hunching up.

    That being said, I like your color and texture work here- in particular the work you have done on shading her striated pecs is nice.

    1. Yeah, it's kinda long. It would be too difficult to change that now. I'm lazy.

    2. I know this too. I'll try to do something with her face. And her neck. We'll see.

    3. Thanks. I really like that clevage:)

    PS: Why people are afraid saying critics? You were the only one. I need the objections. To become better…

    EVERYBODY, I NEED CRITICS!

    November 13, 2008 at 11:33 pm #77751
    Jedediah
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    PS: Why people are afraid saying critics? You were the only one. I need the objections. To become better…

    EVERYBODY, I NEED CRITICS!

    It's because we are all so nice.  My nickname in school was "Nicey Dougherty".

    That said, just keep the critique in mind for the next one- going back and fixing every image takes a lot of time, and leads to madness!

    November 14, 2008 at 4:57 pm #77752
    Solarian, aka LordDaroth
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    I made a few adjusments…

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