[Mr.Shhh]

I've been working on a new story the last few days but for the life of me, I can't settle on a good name for it.  Then it hit me – the Amazons community is loaded with smart people who's creativity I can shamelessly abuse!!

The story's an action piece about a muscular British special forces operative who's captured during a mission.  It opens with her being held in a stinking South American torture chamber from which she must escape and complete her objective.

The main character, Lt. Cronenweth, was inspired by a couple of great femXman drawings, one of which I've posted below (Fem, if you're pissed with me posting this, let me know).

If anyone has something cool sounding, by all means fire it my way.  Hopefullly I can get the story posted in the next day or two. 

Thanks!

 

[iceman75]

How about The Amazon Secret Agent? Nah, too basic, Lt. Croneweth, Muscular Agent for Hire.

[Mr.Shhh]

Heh heh.  Cool.  Kind of like "Austin Powers: International Man of Mystery".  Thanks Jeremy.

[iceman75]

No problem, great idea for a story, and that's a great pic to work off of, I love my girls ripped to shreds.

[The Muffin man]

This is probably gonna sound harsh, but stick to doing gigantic, or get used to drawing a working skeletal structure. Her body is literally impossible. Not because of the musculature, but because it's too thin. The muscles have no depth, and neither does the rest of the body. It's all just vein and muscular structure with no depth or meaning.

Also, the face is a bit too..2D. Like the head was drawn, and the face was pasted on there.

[Mr.Shhh]

Sorry Muffin Man, but I didn't draw the pic –  though I think it's clear FemXman was going for an exagerated reailty.  Anyway, it sure looks good to me.

I think I've got a name for my story (which I just finished).  Be on the lookout for "War Inc." 

[The Muffin man]

Hey I'm just glad you didn't flip out on me for critiquing it 😛

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